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Chapter 235 - Golden Mushroom

🕑 Added 2021-06-14 10:49:20 +0000 UTC

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Joey McGowan

Author-san no likee the shitake?

BrokenMortal

Mushroom hate is real

Zogarth

Fixed

Corwin Amber

'handful was above' was -> were

Danielle Warvel

Agreed. Death to mushroom lovers!!

Gavriel

And yet the Malefic Viper is a mushroom lover, and Jake himself eats mushrooms: Jake protests mushrooms all over, while munching on a mushroom 😉

Zogarth

Fixed stuff

Bobtur

Thanks for the chapter ! Suggestions : "Their lives had been fuel for the growth, as the life energy had to come from somewhere.¨" remove the ¨. "An influx of more health points was incredibly dangerous" > more > too much ? "In the middle of the huge area that was currently experienced explosive growth, a single area stood unaffected." experienced > experiencing "While Jake had tried to be supercharged with life energy before, never this antagonistic type." never it was by, or it had been by. Not quite sure here, but something is definitly missing. You do need a verb in the second part of the sentence. I could be entirely wrong though ... "but they could detect him still somehow." > they could still detect him Otherwise "still" won't have the intended meaning as it itsn't used as an adverb. "Like a jackhammer of arcane destruction, he dug." > jackhammer > Jackhammer in italic, for the lul ? "The barrier was only just a few meters in diameter and sought to protect the mushroom it appeared without a doubt created by the Fungalmancers." > missing a period and words, it appears to + verb > The barrier was only just a few meters in diameter and sought to protect the mushroom. It appeared without a doubt to have been created by the Fungalmancers.

Lictor Magnus

Have all the regular dungeons outside of tutorials been created by gods as well? If so this one seems very video game inspired. I wonder which universe has developed the best video games.

Zogarth

Fixed some stuff.

Jonathan

as Jake grit his teeth and stood up gritted While Jake had tried to be overflown with life energy before, never this antagonistic type. overflowed? overflowing? Mostly this sentence just confuses me actually. When or why did Jake try to cause his life energy to overflow? None of them had even tried to attack using vine attack, Neither of them had even tried to use the vine attack.

Alan Kaiser

A golden turd is still a turd

Raymond Horn

Have to say the math holds up and you can’t argue with his logic. In a mushroom dungeon no matter what happens Jake is the good guy.

Zogarth

I rewrote it a bit.

Monus

I think this part is also kinda weird "while it a good 30 kilometers in had a width of 12 or so". -> "while it had a width of 12 or so a good 30 kilometers in" might make it better, but I am not sure. English is not my first language so I might be talking out of my butt.

Zogarth

Fixed. Weird one.

Zogarth

Fixed.

Monus

Thanks for the chapter. "She fungalmaster" -> "the"

Arrogant Savant

The dot in mushroom.:bad guy turns it into a broken link

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter


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