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Chapter 239 - Justice From Above

🕑 Added 2021-06-18 10:57:19 +0000 UTC

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Mattias Rydahl

+1

I still have a few chapters to go until I have caught up. I really enjoy the story. Great job! One of one reasons I decided to donate! Not sure if you even read reviews of older chapters tho... However, I have a few critiques, but they are my personal criticisms, not necessarily something everyone will agree with...it is mostly what I enjoy about the genre... I think I lost a bit of steam after the World Council. I think you do pure progression growth and fight scenes very well, so that is awesome...However, one of my favorite things about progression and litrpgs is the discovery aspect of the genre where MC meets a new group of people and he slow plays how powerful he is or he is against people much more powerful and is viewed as an underdog and makes a "surprise" triumph. Where other people find out about his power in a suspenseful manner. Or he keeps his true power a secret....To name a few popular progression and lit RPGs that I think do this well and maybe 2 out of 4 of them are directly similar to this in they are system apocalypse stories...are I think Legend of Randidly Ghosthound does this very well going back and forth between earth and higher system planes...and does the build up between fights well...I think Mother of Learning and Paragon of Destruction also does it very well...Defiance of Fall did do this well up through and including the Treasure Hunt Arc... then it kind of fell off..have not been able to continue that past like chapter 350. I think there is not enough of that raw discovery dynamic in this story according to my personal preference...Other people love what the type of story it is though... , it's constant dungeon grinding with some people interaction here and there...which isn't bad, but you can basically skim the dungeon grind parts and still get the gist of the entire story..if you wait to see a name and dialogue where you take a bit more time...After the tutorial Jake has only once been considered the underdog, he does not make any surprise triumphs and everyone on Earth who is marginally powerful knows he is number 1. Yes, Randidly and defiance of fall both know MC is number 1, but with the inclusion of new zones or other races competing and higher zones where they fight and not just receive training there is still a lot of discovery and underdog scenes...In this story you can arguably say that the fort was one such aspect of the discovery portion...and when he first found Miranda and Hank, and rescued Neil but I think those are the only three occurrences since the beginning of the story...so 3x total in 250 chapters...I think the rescuing Neil part and the Beginning of the tutorial when he first found his bloodline were my favorite parts bc that was pure "discovery" of the MC's powers by other people...and in the beginning of the tutorial you could argue he was an underdog...but since then it's just been a race to keep himself at rank 1...and everyone already knows he is it. Now I do not like it when the MC falls from grace and becomes ranked 2 or 3... but it's the build up of people discovering he's the best that I like to read and you gave that away very cheaply and had every single god warn their blessed disciples that Jake is the best and is the progenitor...there was very little discovery phase. That is really my only issue with the story... it took some of the fun out of the world council...also the fact that half of his friends are in the top 10 while I agree with the choice... if you add onto the gods warning almost everyone else it was a double whammy in terms of negating any type of discovery... Everyone knew Jake was number 1 from the get go...

Jon

Whew, finally caught up. I've spent most of my free time this week reading the story, and it's been great. Keep up the good work, Zogarth.

Justin van mele

I think it would be great if the statute of the Malefic Viper showed him in different stages of his life. A snake eating a blue mushroom, a drake lounging, a dragon with its wings spread, and then him in human form.

Thundertruck

Skill chapter let’s gooooo!

Sesharan

They held auditions for the job when this was first brought up if I remember correctly, so he was probably the best at the job.

Yashakami

Oh man, this is such a tease of an ending lol

reigndrops

"As to why it was him every time? For fairness, so there wouldn’t be any discussions about better sculptors being allowed to make certain statues." So this guy was the worst sculptor but they chose him so everyone's statue would be equally bad?

Vaccus

A friday cliff?! How could you!

Xhaare

What started as a funny quip, evolving into many jokes that were always in good taste, further advancing into a running gag and Jake’s most vile enemy… has gone so far as for me as a reader to be concerned if Zogarth has, in some way, been personally assaulted by a real life mushroom man.

Zogarth

Yeah. Writing 6 chapters a week wouldn't be possible if I wasn't :p

Kevin Zhang

Zogarth you doin this full time? I see your monthly go up crazy every day.

Zogarth

Fixed.

“crystalline weapons that they could step themselves with” Stab?

Thanks for the chapter!

Arrogant Savant

The cliffhanger -_-

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter


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