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Chapter 274 - Beatdown

🕑 Added 2021-07-30 10:53:31 +0000 UTC

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Derp

Agreed. Sylphie's POV is good, but it should have come later not to ruin the flow of story.

Dave

I love me some Sylphie pov, but I feel it ruins the mood of the end of the last chapter by having it be the start to this one. You feel mc’s rage and expect an epic beat down, only to get a bucket of cold water thrown on you by the unexpected Sylphie pov. It may work if you have a day to cool down after the end of last chapter, but imo, the Sylphie pov should come in maybe halfway through to not ruin the flow.

Hickity

Time to transmute the bow, I think we all knew it was coming. Thanks for the chappy, looking forward to the next one.

Moonmoon

Thanks for the chapter, great read!

Jonathan Caselli

Uncle Jake showing of in front of his granddaughter Sylpie!

Michael

Yeah, it's all about perspective, sadly. Hawkie and Mystie have probably done the exact same thing many times, but now that it's them being harmed, the eagles are bad. Just the way these stories go. Same as in real life as well. Was reading a historical essay detailing war and sexual violence in the middle ages. It explained that where any time an army would fight or even pass through a town, heaps of people would be raped. If you lose: the men get killed (sometimes kids and even less, the women) and everyone gets raped. If you win: Your own army also rapes you. It's just the depressing nature of reality (thankfully this is nowhere near that).

Jonathan

I kind of feel bad for the Eagles. It's not like they were being evil or anything. Even Hawkie acknowledged that the chief was just doing for his chick what he and Mystie do for Sylphie. They just happened to do it to the wrong hawks. Tough luck in the world of the System.

Matt

Sigh. I don't read for two weeks and when I come back it ends on this epicness just leaving me wanting even more. Can't get enough of the amazing story! Sylphie POV ftw!

Thank you for the chapter! I loved it as well as the continued sylphie POV. We also know that sylphie has a decent grasp on language since she could understand what Jake was saying. Maybe she will be able to speak in a future evolution?

Landsraad

Huh? He's logical all the time. This is the first time he's cut loose in a long time

Landsraad

I know I speak for yhe community when I say yhat we love Sylphie POV

Landsraad

I feel you. College is starting up again and thats an extra 600$ a month on my monthly bill :(

Landsraad

Probably let Sylphie do it so she doesnt develop an inner demon (a mental block that hinders cultivation progress do to a traumatic experience).

Landsraad

I just hope she doesnt get scared of him like what happened to....(different novel) Jason in He Who Fights Monsters when his family found out how powerful he truly was.

Gavriel

Wake up call Sylphie; call him uncle badass 😉😉

Stefan Mensink

Loved this. The second "meaningless" is a bit much. Maybe "ineffective"?

Zogarth

Fixed some things

Jonathan

She was sure she biggest eagle too… but it had just fired a laser. Sylphie knew they needed to help! she needed to help or they needed her help as he hadn’t gone to get it or even knew if it was ready. and didn't even know if... the large bird transformed it into a beam of light, transformed itself The two of them were weaker than him when they initially met. weaker than he

Jared J. Sinclair

Sorry author-san, but I'm not rich enough to keep paying up, (only had enough for one month lol) so I guess this is goodbye for now. This is a great story, I hope to see it to completion one day.

Heraclitus

Yeah, I'm sure the guy whose bloodline and overall personality revolve around freedom, ruthlessness and the instincts of a hunter will spare a monster that contributed to almost killing some of his only friends. Just as I'm sure the little Eagle will be totally cool chilling with the people that brutally killed it's parents.

Heraclitus

All fear Jake of the string-shooty-stick!

thkiw

I'm a bit reluctant on the killing them thing. since there's a potential playmate for sylphe, and killing kids always sucks. on sylphe's side though. jake is just like that weird eccentric but nice uncle who's also a mafia boss. I really like it.

Clint

"A string-shooty-stick." Pure gold. I can't stop laughing.

BenjiVoid

Probably a 'from'? Or spin it around: "of his regular weapons he only had his scimitar"

Vaccus

just had the scimitar of his regular weapons... was the of supposed to be an and?

Michael

"She was a really bad hawk" :(

Thomas H

Small typo last section, from start to tend (end). Thanks for the chapter

BrokenMortal

Thx for the chapter! I wonder if Hawkie will kill the eagle?

Sesharan

Aw, how adorable! What a sweet murderous rage!

BenjiVoid

I hope this release of emotions also means we're going to have a more level headed and logical treasure hunt because he's more ready to re-contain himself.

Yashakami

Damn, this was an awesome chapter!

Zogarth

Fixed

BubblyGhost

he was sure she biggest eagle too - need a was after she and I would replace she with the creature's title then Jake was a lot stronger. - current Jake What following truly wasn’t a fight - What followed

roxurio10003

I'm really curious about Sylphie reaction to Jake true power

BenjiVoid

"she was sure she biggest eagle too"? Cute speak or mistake?

BenjiVoid

TFTC

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter

Markus Iversen

Tftc


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