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Chapter 308 - Treasure Hunt: Phase Two

🕑 Added 2021-09-08 10:57:45 +0000 UTC

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Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

Gavriel

😆; it opens no new area technically; just the upper half of the world hehehe

Zogarth

Man, I already fixed that one but Patreon didn't have it go through... smh. But thanks! Should be fixed now.

There are 2 instances within a few paragraphs of one another in which Jake divvies out the medallions with different outcomes [and also a typo in Slyphie's name in the one I suspect was meant to be nixed]: (a) '“Sure,” Jake agreed as he tossed a medallion to Miranda and another to Carmen beside her. The last two he kept for himself and Sylphia.' . . . (b) 'He nonchalantly handed Miranda and Carmen a key each and let the two of them pick out two altars. For the last two keys, he went over and gave his brother one along with a medallion, and he and Sylphie would handle the last one.'

Zogarth

Fixed

Corwin Amber

'was the prettiest' prettiest -> pettiest (not sure if you meant this) 'this as once as a' <- re-phrasing needed 'way up till where' till -> to

Zogarth

Nepotism is to treat family or close friends favorably, often giving them opportunities over others. In other words, Jake having his brother help him get one of the keys despite them not being in the same faction, and then Valhal also helping him despite no actual alliance or partnership in place, but because Sylphie made friends with Carmen.

Kris Boxall

I don’t get that nepotism jab the Sword Saint made can someone explain?

Zogarth

Fixed

lockx

Winched a bit > winced a bit

BenjiVoid

That's why the undead are further away? You don't go the the thing in the middle, it clears the mist so you can go further in every other direction. I would actually like to see teamwork between the best. They might even be a semi-party with eron as their high level healer. But Jake will probably carry against the final boss with his root.

Dont_like_to_Talk

Thanks for the chapter

BenjiVoid

He wants their factions to be on good terms, and there's no hate between the two of them. But they're very competitive, they started with a faction based competition, but really they just want to duel.

Jonathan

the event about to turn place take place as it exploded out to both times, both sides also: https://youtu.be/E0SA1JlVbM4?t=17

Yeah i hope too. I mean its just the Nature of the Event

BenjiVoid

Actually wrong. You're right, but remove the comma. "Jake had, in usual jake-..."

Ollie

Kinda weirded out. Noburo guy wanted to build relations with Jake, but still builds all this conflict with him. Wonder how all that will pan out. But also hope Jacob and Noburo gets smacked good for a while

BenjiVoid

"in usual" -> as usual

mhaj58

Hope Jake beats the crap out of Jacob

Arrogant Savant

lol sword saint won the bet but still lost


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