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Chapter 348 - To the End

🕑 Added 2021-11-19 11:48:45 +0000 UTC

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Adrian Gorgey

I enjoyed it

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

This was to drawn out....like, a lot too much :)

Dasious

I dont think you ever wrote Jake reclaiming his scimitar..

Zarik0

Well think its to much dragged and a too big asspul vs the first fight but I giggle when they finished by fisting each other face and teeth flew ;P

Gardor

He was grabbing the guy and didn't use his touch based poison skill, the one he's repeatedly said has his highest damage output?

I think the duell was really long but i liked the description and details of the fight.

Nick Nicholson

Garbage ending.

FusedBump96

Yeah I like the thrust of this arc, fleshing out the Sword Saint as a character has been great and I like their companionship quite a bit (Certainly more than the first meeting between Reika and Jake). But the stakes are too low to draw out both these fights to this degree (though not as badly as some are implying when the chapters are read all at once). The Monarch fight was punctuated by constant "but we still had half our cards left to play" and "we're winning pretty easily" moments and this one is pretty much just a bloody spar. The lack of tension means that theres nothing that I feel really elevates this beyond a 20 chapter series of fights (very big DBZ vibes, which is fine if that's what you're going for but it doesn't really match the the prior arcs in the story).

Regnal

Plus Jake didn't even get to use his trump card by going Ultra Instinct. Sword saint got to power up but Jake doesn't? King of the forest was killed by it when Jake wasn't even D grade yet. Jake would have won in all of 5 seconds if he could have done his own "transcendent" level power up. Why did the author not do that? Just to make them tie? I call bullshit.

I don't feel the fight was drawn out too long at all. Especially with how great the set up was for the Sword Saint. It also worked because of all the power ups that developed because of their "spar". Great job.

Zogarth

I think a factor is that you became a Patron yesterday, so just read through it all within a day or so.

Bat

That was a fantastic fight. Why is everyone hating on it?

Bailey Lowe

I am so confused by these comments, I've been sitting on the edge of my seat at a party ignoring all my friends, SO GRIPPED by this fight. Thank you Zogarth this was amazing.

Seiryus

Agreeing with everyone else here, this chapter was completely unnecessary. It didn't really add anything of relevance, and it wasn't that cool because it dragged on far too long, not even counting the very long fight that happened right before. Besides, they aren't even enemies, and it turned into a bloodbath. I understand being obstinate and not wanting to back down, but they should have finished on a friendly note and agreed to another duel down the line.

Azel Robles

This chapter just prove what I said in the last one, extremely drawn out and the sword saint simply keeps tanking insane hits (and has as much strength as Jake who has a ton of op titles and +60% all stats ???) The dude was almost cut in half, lost an arm , got gravely poisoned multiple times punched in the head, tanked arrows on his limbs, had a life stealing (which apparently didn't life steal here ? Maybe it was still full i don't remember honestly) sword attack which he blocked in no way so "full" power (still with a stat boost) in his shoulder and still had some ressources and mobility in the end ? I can understand transcendance being strong but this is straight up deus ex machina level crap, "yeah he got insight into the Dao and now he has infinite health mana stamina and all his stats get a 500% buff and also he can shoot lasers out of his eyes probably"

Ryan

I found myself skimming the entire chapter, just like the last one. I think two somewhat drawn out fights back to back hurt the pacing, especially when we all want to see the rewards from the treasure hunt. Hopefully we get back on track this Monday. Thanks for the chapter!

KingGoomba

Yeah I agree with others this fight is way too drawn out and I just don’t feel the suspense this chapter is obviously trying to build. My big issue is that if they were enemies I would be more into it. This was suppose to be a spar but for such a drawn out bloody fight if one does kill the other I’m going to be disappointed.

Azulmar

I'm confused how Sylvie left on her own when she shares a token with Jake.

Ben

yeah it was a bit of a shame as it’s hard to maintain suspense when it’s this long, felt like you could skim the fight and barely missed much

Alnatura

Another cliff on a Friday zogarath. Don't make it a habit :)

dragonslaver

Probably has something to do with the sword saints being a "transcendent"

I completely agree.

Vaccus

he was forced to -->but he was forced to

Collateral_ink

I think the issue is less that this fight was too drawn out (though, it was a bit), and more that it was situated right after another long, multi-chapter fight against the Monarch. The pacing is the issue.

Tomer Yud

wait so its a tie? how can that be, jake stats should be alot higher considering his titles

Markus Iversen

tftc

Douglas Norton

GOD DAMNIT ANOTHER CLIFF HANGER! WHEN WILL THEY END?!

Simon

Dam you're really doing this to us

BrokenMortal

I don't understand, are they trying to kill each other

Reis_

I think this fight was a bit too drawn out, honestly. It would have been perfect if it was compressed in at least a couple chapters less. At least for me.

Jon Lomax

thanks for the chapter. as much as I've enjoyed the end of this arch, this last chapter was just silly and mostly irrelevant. cant wait to get back to normal chapters and story.

Should_be_working

Ngl I feel like this fight has been dragged out a little to long...

Dont_like_to_Talk

Thanks for the awesome chapter

Nyye

Can't keep doing this man, your going to have to run out of cliffs eventually...

Jonathan

Scratches? Flesh wounds?

Silvertooth09

Thanks for the chapter.

BubblyGhost

Aww c'mon Z! Don't pull this on us! It's bloody friday as well!

Ricky Kukowski

thanks gor the chapter. fun arc, but now we get to my favorite part, the loot!! and results

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter

Detrox

Nice


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