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Chapter 354 - Unexpected Visitor

🕑 Added 2021-11-29 11:46:01 +0000 UTC

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Robert Rosenthal

When will folks realize the holy church is a scam everyone that has a gods interest gets over death? I mean jake allegedly was the only survivor in his tutorial but a whole pile of humans walking around. Hell the king of the forest apparently is alive as well. I mean clearly this is the case maybe the primordial are liars or it changed later but it seems eversmile and sanguine can do it. Which feels like a decent percentage of gods, are the vahal connected to vahlhalla m? So two primordials and at least two others so is it 1 per pantheon? It dramatically changed the stakes, heck didn’t jake ask villy not to revive him…

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

For fucks sake just kill William off. He isn't an interesting antagonist. And the power up just made the whole story utterly meaningless.

Joey McGowan

Ah ffs...I'm going to have to read about this dude in the future arent I...

Dave

Ugh I hate William. I don’t hate him in a ‘that makes him a good antagonist’ kind of way, I hate him in a ‘this character should be dead already and it’s annoying af that he’s still relevant’ way. I hate him for the same reason I hate divination in xianxia and this is just proven how he’s become lvl 172 out of nowhere. It’s all ‘he’s strong bc he needs to be now’ which would’ve just been better with a new character imo.

BrokenMortal

I almost feels like we're being trolled!! Lol! Not only bring back the most hated character, but make him OP! Brilliant

Hunter Vook

I want to see Jake to wreck William despite the level difference. Edit: Wrong name lol

LilyOnlyJam

Thank you for the chapter

LilyOnlyJam

I'm just going to say it, i think the William - Eversmile storyline is interesting, and a good way to get some understanding of the weirder parts of the system.

Nick Nicholson

Jesus this guy again. William is the worst, just kill him off ffs.

Kale Daley

You aren't wrong. He really could be an interesting rival. The problem is that he hasn't been set up as a rival. I really don't see any way, knowing Jake's character as it has been presented so far, that Jake doesn't just immediately attempt to murder him after what he has done and recently did. Hopefully their relationship can grow from there, however the fight goes I guess.

Alexander Johnson

Yes, exactly - all that sweet juicy experience opportunity for Jakey 😈

Bat

Suddenly the next fight between them is going to be interesting.

Markus Iversen

Tftc

Zak Cornell

It seems like he was in a time dilation dungeon so it’s been far longer, he probably took much longer than Jake to get there

BubblyGhost

So much juicy discontent from the reader base, lovely. Haha, I find it humorous most are mad at the level gap when Jake's whole thing is based around meeting enemies that exceed his level.

Rad

Thank god another person understands character development. He’s a psychopath that has a path for redemption basically. The system evolution has brought him growth, and now if he’s handled correctly(by the author) then he could become one of the best characters in the story.

Rad

Holy shit. Why does everyone hate William. He’s pretty much the character with the most development, and potential. He’s a good character, with power, and backing. He’s pretty much the perfect rival for Jake.

Telmo Brito

He only crippled everyone instead of murdering them ... Progress!

That level gap between William and Jake seems a little extreme but it’s at least good to know where that weasel has been during everything.

sinewyk

I don't understand the hate against William. You don't hate psychopaths, they are above all that shit. I'm interested in the author handling of psychopath + race evolution that somehow kinda fixed it. Why the hate 🤔

flssdd

Unless he tries something or whatever, it epicly fails his expectations and he has a panic attack. He has ptsd from Jake after all and I doubt a few years killing stuff was enough to fix him. Maybe he thinks now that he has mind powers he is unstoppable or ready to face his fears or something, but that's still stupid. Why does he even poke instead of being as far away as possible and minding his own business? It's not like the planet is too small for both of them...

Gabe Evans

Making a bet that Eversmile split William in to two people somehow, one bad and one good, that would be so interesting

Luciaron

So much for the therapist saying William was recovering

BenjiVoid

Most of it has been at least alluded to before.

Bakerdea

Aw shit. William's probably an actual threat to Jake now. I'm not sure if Jake could win a fight against him, with how much more time William has had to gain experience.

Adurna

Oh I sort of figured he might have had some more growth but still does not quite get how much of an asshole he is. We will see I suppose.

Torbjørn Nilsen

No, a good antagonist is interesting. They add to the story. William is a detriment, that's why people want him dead. William is boring. He is a chapterwaster.

Landsraad

Yeah, William kinda blows. That's how you know the author made a good antagonist

Kris Boxall

The best version of William was one that was terrified of Jake, if after a few years in Nevermore he’s regressed to the point he thinks targeting Jake’s family will come without any consequences there’s no saving this character

Dominic Pernicone

Oh boy. William again. Character should have been killed off the last time Jake and him met. 🤮

Kale Daley

Ugh, I really hate this character. Now he shows back up, now somehow nearly 40 levels higher than a guy who has spent almost the entirety of his time fighting and apparently with some sort of mind/karma magic that allows him to be a skilled enough infiltrator to sneak into the base of a group of assasins and have people not be alarmed by his utterly ridiculous questions. Oh, and if that wasn't enough he somehow has access to the universe at large which even the major universal factions can't do. I hope this can be explained in some sort of reasonable way but right now it seems totally ludicrous.

Zogarth

Fixed

Vaccus

Caleb annoyingly so unable to dispute it. --> Caleb annoyingly so, was unable to dispute it.

Ryan

I know there’s going to be lots of complaints but while I love the overall story here, I REALLY don’t like William. I understand the need for an antagonist to push the story forward since the Treasure Hunt is over but damn does William suck.

Alnatura

I agree. This dude is fucked up, a maniac and a murderer of hundreds of people. Jake has to hunt him down no matter what.

Flogoyog

I haven't read all the sidestories and intermissions yet, but William is still the least interesting character in this entire story. I mostly got over my dislike for him that grew in the tutorial, but the treasure hunt really put into perspective how I would like to learn more about every other secondary character while every chapter about him or his patron just makes me yearn for something else. It's almost funny that instead of wanting the protagonist to overcome William because the conflict would be interesting, I want him gone because the rest of the story disconnected from him is so much more interesting.

Jon

FFS, not this guy again. If there was ever someone that needed killing, it's him. No amount of improbable character growth post-Tutorial will make up for him being a complete madman and mass murderer. And of course now he gets a huge powerup to keep Jake from easily killing him again.

Joshua Green

Damn, Willi is back. Thought he would know better. He is going to need another beat down it seems.

Tilen Praprotnik

Thanks

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter

Tftc

Dont_like_to_Talk

Thanks for the chapter


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