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Chapter 355 - Visiting Skyggen & Skyggen

🕑 Added 2021-11-30 11:50:15 +0000 UTC

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Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

Edy

Nice re-introduction on William. Thanks for the chapter

Gavriel

Great reason; aka I was bored and curious: this is Jake not Sylphie? Right 😆

BrokenMortal

Interesting. Thx for the chapter

TheJammiest2

I'm really liking the introduction of William and his 'faction' back into the story, it adds an element of overarching plotlines that while I'm sure are present in the whole story, just haven't really been seen much so far. This isn't due to you as an Author or anything like that, you're doing incredible, just that we are finally getting deep enough into the story that we can start to see different plot threads come together.

Gavriel

Eversmiles is a monster so.... That transcendent ability is also sinister...

Adurna

We can't be entirely sure he will be an enemy even if working with monsters. Not all monsters need taming/eradication. Look at Sylphie and parents. Viewing it as an unknown faction with a higher risk of irreconcilable differences is fair though.

Bat

really curios for a pov from William now

Vaccus

Of course he is working with the monsters! Love ya Z great chapter!

Dont_like_to_Talk

Thanks for the chapter

Zogarth

Fixed

Jonathan

“Would you mind following us to the city hall so we can discuss? I think that will be easier, and we can avoid unwanted attention.” Jake considered her words, and with his suspicion of the area already not being what it seemed… he wouldn’t. he would

LilyOnlyJam

Thank you for the chapter, i enjoyed it. I wonder what kind of people Jake's parents are, I hope we get to see them interact this visit. Oh and his brother's wife and child, I wonder how that kid will grow up.

Zogarth

Fixed. Yeah, that just happens sometimes, and I never notice stuff like that when reading through.

Landsraad

You have two lines of "not as simple as that" within 3 paragraphs. Comes off kinda uncreative since it's not being expressed in an "exasperating" way.

RedFaux

Earth Humans Caleb. Earth Humans can't

Tilen Praprotnik

Hmm I didnt think he would be the enemy again. Thanks for the chapter

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter


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