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Chapter 377 - Jake vs the King (Rematch?)

🕑 Added 2021-12-30 11:44:20 +0000 UTC

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Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

Estrini

What is your other 2?

Bat

Yes. Completely agree

@swiftfate Yeah I'm on your side with this one. Seeing the author's comments on RR about the hate he had received for this work is astounding. Imagining how soul-crushing it would feel for people to attack something that you poured so much effort into would ruin the motivation to keep going. If you clearly aren't enjoying a story, just don't read it. I can appreciate comments regarding grammar or constructive criticism but people need to be mindful that it's not written for them as an individual or at least present their feedback in some constructive manner without shitting on the author. RR authors are pretty vocal on Reddit about some of the RR audience being absolutely horrible. It's honestly an aspect of the community that needs to be called out more, some feedback is downright hostile, and if the author ever tried to cater to them it would turn me off of the story entirely. I understand that people are entitled to their opinions but I hate this idea that fans of a series need to ignore part of the community who are spewing braindead feedback. Good on you for making this post.

Greiü

I really like this story. I read a lot of trash on RR and I set myself a hard limit to a max of 3 stories I pay for on Patreon. With every chapter I remember why this is in my top 3. Thanks for not just this chapter but all 376 before it too. Thanks for making my life just a little bit more enjoyable everyday

Joey McGowan

Haha, I cant wait till they're off earth and folks are going "wait what the fu...two for one progenitors!?"

Octaeon

It does seem kinda annoying when put like this, but it doesn't bother me much - only William.

jordan

Wah, wah, wah, my opinion is the only one that matters, anyone else who dares to share their opinion is worthless and should be ignored. Listen to me, ME! I am the only one that matters here! MEEEEEEEEEE!

SwiftFate

Not gonna lie,out of all the stories I have followed. Which is a lot. This o e has to have the most whiniest readers. So many people can't grasp the concept of good storytelling and proper progression or planning by an author. Obviously you have plans that they/we are not aware of, and it will take several chapters for tjose to become clear. But no, people just can't get over the fact that their ideal scenario is not happening NOW NOW NOW. Idiots. Ignore everything except proper critical feedback mate, keep doing what you are doing and write the story YOU want to write regardless of the childish dipshits not understanding when to be quiet and wait. Obviously you ha e a lot of entitled RR readers here, which is botb a good and bad thing. Good, because $$$, bad because RR readers are genuinely usually some of the dumbest, unoriginal, egotistical and entitled dumb cunts when it comes to an audience for stories. They are used to reading trash and influencing stories in a direction THEY want to see suxh as Harem or faster progression or more OP main characters etc etc.. Ignore them.

Monadologist

I'm fine with the king being alive, but this easily reached detente was kinda meh.

Felix Ng

Guess I am in the minority who is perfectly fine with the king being alive.

Finn Ryan

It was explained in one of the side stories. You can read them by going to clicking on Zogarth and selecting the side story filter

Zarik0

Well sry to say this but im a bit zzz (and feed up) about this little aspect of the story, its becoming a bit annoying that every "ennemy" (important/boss like people) down get to come back alive/be ressurected/escape death or wathever and dragg the thing again and again and the conclusion of it I mean at this point its everyone William, The King, The Vampire Lord, The Sword Saint, the Dude with his immortality and full vitality build, Jacob and co If every "memorable" adversary or conflit need to be put down 3-4 time for finnaly reach somewhat a conclusion its a bit......you see We never gonna reach some conclusion and this dragg the thing and feel a bit to much forced to me so it can happen I think maybe you need to work a bit on this aspect of the story and accept to let down and burry some of the good character you create when its time to let them go, its becoming ridiculous in my opinion as of now If its not some beast and some random normy i expect now that they will be alive and come back in some form in the story again and maybe again and again dragging down the thing because as of now with everyone and everytime it happenned all the time Its not relevant but here im a bit surprised by the feeling he get down by soul attack so easely like that and his bloodline (for what i understand is in his true soul) dont react at all and lash back in some way and make it more difficult for the King like we have already see it multiple time (was thinking he off course still can take soul damage but he get good resistance on it and bloodline can counter attack it sometime, i mean he can support the pressure of multiple primordial with it, a thing who normally just fuck up directly people) so feel a little off for me he feel so powerless like that vs some soul attack here when i was thinking its some of his strong point (Gaze and bloodline) its maybe how its writted or just me Honestly not your best chapter in my opinion, glad it was only 1 chapter and we passed it fast and i anticipate greatly all the other thing you are cooking who are coming :)

P enyuk

What was up with those Immortal Birds of Observation during the tutorial?

Gavriel

OH NO, THERE ARE TWO OF HIM! (I imagine someone observing 😆)

Zogarth

Fixed stuff

Jonathan

“One should always strive to improve,” Exactly correct ... but it doesn't sound like Jake to me. I feel he would have started with "You should..." Scales covered his body as Pride activated fully and Pride -- as makes it sound like the Scales are part of Pride. Better yet: He covered his body with scales, activated Pride fully, took a stance, and knocked an arrow. (eliminate the passive voice.)

Jon

That said, I am still greatly enjoying the story overall and was glad to see a minor timeskip. I'm hoping to see Jake get his sword upgrade taken care of soon and immediate leveling needed to wear all of his new gear, then go traveling and exploring. It's a big, biiiig world out there, and he hasn't seen but a small fraction of it.

Zogarth

Fixed it a bit.

Jon

Gotta admit, I'm not a fan of the whole ongoing King (now Fallen King) subplot. I prefer it when slain enemies stay dead. Also seems weird for it to have been getting stronger all this time when it was barely alive. I can understand it becoming more powerful after being restored by Jake and having a chance to fight and gain experience, but not when it was little more than a scrap of a soul attached to the mask and unconscious for most of that time. If anything, it should be suffering from something similar to the Sword Saint after he used his Transcendent ability, with a certain amount of level loss that needs to be recouped before regaining its full power, let alone being even stronger than before.

".. and that did get through he had his legendary scales for." I might be reading it wrong, but this bit of prose is either clunky or at least a tad erroneous. While apologetic for backseating, I suggest a minor revision: ".. and for anything that did get through he had his legendary scales."

Michael Weis

Excellent chapter. Covered practically everything.

BrokenMortal

Thx for the chapter

Markus Iversen

Im just to fast 😂😉

Kollish

A great way to create a very interesting party.

Dont_like_to_Talk

Thanks for the chapter

Rad

Jake has a buddy now. I wonder if Caleb and their family would enjoy the presence of the king and Villy at a party.

Kollish

Thanks for chapter! Real nice fight and gotta say I really liked how they didn't keep on going further with it.

Mr.Cat with a top hat

DID MARKUS BEAT ME AGAIN?! ALSO TFTC

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter

Atorn Gaming

Tftc

Markus Iversen

Tftc


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