Leaqio.com
Zogarth from patreon
Zogarth patreon

Chapter 387 - Underground

🕑 Added 2022-01-13 11:47:17 +0000 UTC

Comments

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

Zogarth

Rewrote the section a bit

Zogarth

Fix

Titaniumtac

"Miranda wondered what it was but did as he said upon him" awkward sentence,no suggestions though...

Jonathan

as Felicia came suddenly appeared behind it

Tetrisman87

Tftc!

Gavriel

Troll Author 😂 Trolling Sultan

Zogarth

You wrote "see" more times in this paragraph than is in the chapter XD

Zarik0

Feel to much emphasis and use constantly and all time of the word "see" by "ennemy" for hidding aspect here (feel a lack of vocabulary and emphasis making it to much a visual aspect of perception of his skill hidding/invis and how the other perceive thing using only "visual" with using only "see" as a word) when for insect (termite) and etc underground, its more scent or feeling/detection of mana used by them here logically (and needed to hide to it) than a visual perception and them "seeing" thing with their eyes I still dont understand how people (if not in survival mode and need to do it absolutely now to survive) rush thing and loose the Perfect Evolution and all the free stats it give, make no fucking sense at all each time and we dont get a plausible reason for it each time it appear (loose 2-3 month big big max to level up your profession or class and get all these free stats after? who are what equivalent to 10-20 D grade level of the class or the profession gain? for some people who dont get exceptionnal OP class The thing seem so stupid if they are not forced to discard it for survive a big bad time, its basically cripple themselve in the future for no reason i can see.... So alchemical troll and guardien of his garden maybe :)))) if he continue he gonna have a lot of beast in his home (bird/troll/soon insect) :P go for a "zoo" :)

Roberticus M

Ngl solo grind stuff is nice and all, but I'm still waiting on that school arc

Tomer Yud

well he didnt use stealth much lately so no reason for it to evolve randomly

Bryce

I know Jake wants fair fights and all that, it's part of the charm, but it always bugged me that his stealth ability was lacking, this was fun to read. Tftc

jordan

If the troll has any aptitude for alchemy, Jake can teach it and influence its records using his Skill of Legacy Teachings of the Heretic-Chosen Alchemist. There is also "Legacy of Man" but it is unclear if that can help a troll. The skill is about humans passing on Records, but it also says "and makes ANYONE you teach far more likely to unlock new paths"

Void

Now another 24 hours before the next chapter. Honestly I hope jake when he returns finds a way to help the trolls records. Considering the issues stated to him previously when on his crusade.

Zogarth

Did fix some stuff.

RedFaux

Sultan most useful subordinate once again

Dion Hier

This is something I appreciate

Finn Ryan

TFTC

Monus

Stylistic: "his one lung" -> is kinda weird. Not wrong, but does that mean Jake has only 50% of a normal lung? "A few workers began gathering as they luckily chose the tunnel only five meters to his side ..." -> "A few workers began gathering in the vicinity of his hideout. To his relieve they to repair another tunnel only five meters to his side - ..." Not an error it would smooth over reading I think. Fun chapter and thx again

Dont_like_to_Talk

Thanks for the chapter

MahoganyWood

Thanks for the chapter!!

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter

Markus Iversen

Tftc

Monus

First and thanks for the chapter!


More Creators