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Chapter 421 - A Life of Punishment

🕑 Added 2022-03-08 07:57:36 +0000 UTC

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Jackofnotrade

She frowned a bit but didn’t ask. Instead, she just nodded and began going them over. / should be "going over them "

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

Shadeymankey

Bonk!

Linbi

Finally, next time… IS BONKING TIME!

Ph34r_n0_3V1L

"That in itself was already someone who she seriously needed to integrate herself with, but the Chosen?" -> ingratiate herself "It was like going from being told she was to work for a local Lord only to find out she was actually under the employ of the emperor." -> Since Lord is capitalized, Emperor needs to be as well.

Olof Karlsson

Thanks for the chapter!

Peter Bruckback

I’m envisioning the dark souls 3 boss. Father Ariandel I believe?

Vega

Congrats on your book. I’m not going to lie I was kinda surprised Jake didn’t just dismiss Meria subconsciously due to how opposite they are. Which would ironically be exactly what she wants.

Seb

Congrats on being officially published!!

Edward

What a naughty little heretic hehehe

Alex R

He's got to ask why she wants to take that class.

Enko

a stay thought entered her head: he probably won’t be too angry if I missed one. --> stray thought, tftc!

ADOLFO VILLEGAS

BONK GO TO VIPER JAIL!

BrokenMortal

BONK

SpaceGoddess76

I feel like she is doing to pick classes she thinks Jake or someone of the Order should go to and not actual general alchemists.

RedFaux

Bonk

Tetrisman87

Tftc! "Instead, she just nodded and began going them over." -> Going over them/ looking them over

Wolke

I really like those Jake-Meira interactions cause their mindsets are basically the complete opposite of each others Looking forward to seeing a lot more of them in the future :D

Zogarth

Fixed

Catherine

Thanks for the chapter “Apathy was the best they could it” —> the end of this sentence needs changing

Detrox

Nice

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter

Cjack PVP

Tftc


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