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Chapter 396 - Finding the Purpose

🕑 Added 2022-01-27 11:46:40 +0000 UTC

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Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

Ben Waschuk

Jake is kinda dumb isnt he?

Catherine

I feel like Haven might become a haven or training ground for beasts who are either being unjustly persecuted or who are looking for experience amongst humans who won’t immediately kill them on sight provided they follow the city rules

The 49th Khan

Come to think of it. Didn't Reika come to Haven to give Jake something from the Sword Saint?

Vega

I will say the way you handled the settlement in this story is probaply one of my favorite ways to handle it. A story like this happens and the main character gets a township cause why not, gets super invested for like 20 chapters then just goes gallavanting off somewhere for 100 chapters then repeats. In this story it was litterally a choice of its right there why wouldn’t you grab it, and then he finds someone and goes hey, you want to govern the city for me? And then goes mostly hands off, I like that it’s relevant but also that it doesn’t become a huge thing.

Hoopsterben

I mean it kind of did give a purpose to haven, to be Jake’s base to come home to. The story is already starting to move away from Earth with more regularity. What kind of purpose do you want? Right now there isn’t even a clear antagonist. Do you want it to be some sort of proactive moral purpose? End world hunger, initiate world peace?

Zed

he and she reaching for the same tea cup?

SpaceGoddess76

While I like the idea behind the purpose of Haven I feel like it’s really missing something. I mean yes Jake is powerful & Villy is sort of a backer but that won’t be enough eventually. I mean what happens when people from Earth start reaching B Tier & A Tier? Or even S Tier(gods)? What happens as the factions keep getting bigger & more populous? Earth is massive right now but eventually the factions territories are going to put pressure on Haven & prevent them from growing because while the Order can help Jake he will still need strong people if Haven is going to be his base. Plus all those strong people will need support. What about Arnold? Neil & his party? While I like the whole neutral thing, I feel like Miranda could at least work to better the city. It doesn’t have to be on the scale of the Risen or the Church but at least enough to stay Neutral and provide an actual territory for Jake to keep as a base. Because as Jake increases in power he is going to need a bigger territory as a base, not necessarily for the power or resources of a territory but just as an actual base. So I feel like instead of just saying Haven will be nuetral and do almost nothing. Zog you should actually sit down and give Haven an actual purpose. I mean the whole point of this chapter was an excuse for you not to actually come up with a solid purpose for Haven.

Heraclitus

Obviously Jake will snap out of his training in a panic and rush back to Earth, not because of a big-hero-moment, but because he forgot Sylphie's birthday or something like that.

Mathias

Her asking questions about the direction of haven are pretty natural, as it dictates how the future relationship of their alliance will turn out. I do agree that the question about how haven will support jake was dumb, but it also acts as exposition for the readers (still pretty dumb and longwinded though).

Adurna

Nice little development of Reika and Miranda! And good for R to finally get an answer about ambition from someone else than J.

Adurna

Because subterfuge. Being unidentifiable is an identity marker. A false identify is better.

thomas johnson

Okay just wondering why does it matter what others are looking for if he has primordial veil? I am confused why is he going through all this trouble to create a new face for identify? Can someone please explain because based on the amount of chapters this seems to be important just don't get why.

Kollish

Last chapter seemed to say it was more like 1week each 6months. To my understanding

Dont_like_to_Talk

Thanks for the chapter

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Unless I'm mistaken, the time dilation Jake is under is roughly one day to a year, right? So if he's been gone a month in a half, that about 45 years...

Zogarth

Edited a bit of stuff

But he has the backing of a god no?

Alexander Hallonblad

Tftc! Miranda bit concerned ... was a bit?

graham

Thanks for the chapter!

BrokenMortal

Thx for the chapter. While I like the Sword Saint, I have mixed feeling for his clan. Once the system stops protecting this universe those not part of a faction will be killed or enslaved. Thinking you can survive without a gods protection seems foolish.

Ben

thanks for the chapter, not going to lie Reika came off across as pretty rude in her questioning of Miranda it was almost like she had barely put any thought into it, like he’s the chosen of the Malefic Viper a primordial and she asks how he’ll get support when he’s off training with him… (wtf). Not sure what the plans are with the Noburu Clan but Reika is starting to feel super clingy, feels like she’s starting to become super protective of him and concerning herself in matters which really aren’t her business so not sure what her deal is but she’s starting to become pretty annoying.

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter

Tyler Shepherd

I hope that there isn’t a plot point about him needing to come back to earth to save the day because I hate that sort of story telling and I didn’t like it during the tutorial, sorry for the rant I’m really liking the story so far and hope it only goes up from here

Joseph Irdanto

Thanks Zogarth! Fun chapter...

"protect himself from something he didn’t know what was" -> "protect himself from something unknown to him" maybe?

BenjiVoid

Thanks!


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