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Chapter 399 - A New Era

🕑 Added 2022-02-01 09:29:55 +0000 UTC

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Danielle Warvel

If only I could do maniacal laughter as good as this one guy in high school. Had a big deep voice and could do a laugh that could make your blood run cold.

Alexander Johnson

Hell yeah! Almost gave an evil cackle myself in public, lol

Danielle Warvel

Feeling the evil laughter coming on 😈

Aaron Weingrad

The face slapping of smug elite fellow students who will underestimate Jake and/or allow others to believe they are Chosen will be epic as I expect it to take half an arc of writing till the big reveal.

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

Alex R

He is [nothing than] a target -> [nothing more than]

Hickity

For some reason, I'm getting some Jack of Blades vibes lol.

Ben

ok sounds a lot better now

Zogarth

Already did rewrite it a little.

Ben

But you mentioned they were asked to leave which would probably disincentivize them from staying and trying to help make it better. Sort of sounded like they planned to just keep it running on fumes based on this. Maybe reword that as it could help clear any misunderstandings, maybe could change it to something like this: Snappy didn’t want to push anyone into staying due to the limited opportunities and unfortunately for the Order none chose to stay due to the Vipers absence and instead sought to make a name for themselves and grow in power. However most still remained hopeful that he would one day return.

Tetrisman87

Tftc!

Zogarth

Fixed

Zogarth

Not really, I just phrased it badly both places. It is more that the Order has not gained any more gods, as in that none had stayed and tried to make things work. None had tried to take some charge and empower the Order. So the Order has not gained any gods, even if people who had been in the Order did become gods. So, more to say, it is that no "true" member became a god, as they would have stayed.

Simon Casey

“ How many gods had ascended during the many years the Viper had been in isolation? The number of gods who had stayed was zero, but that didn’t tell the entire story. They had just been told to leave after becoming gods. They had spread out across the multiverse and done their own things as the Order no longer offered them much. It was to be expected.” Is this meant as a soft retcon of side story 1? Because I read that recently and in that side story it specifically states that no gods rose in the order while Villy was gone, ans he was disappointed about that.

Tomer Yud

One Step Dimension

Blightdad

Does Villy have One Step Mile too?

Corwin Amber

'should have least slow' have -> at 'go but were trained' were -> was

Hunter Vook

Badum boom

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter

Vaccus

manipulated the orb a little...-->manipulated the tablet a little. ( you called it a tablet in the previous paragraph I wasn't sure which object you wanted to roll with)

Seen Death

He has reasons for what hes done but dont forget hes literally destroyed entire worlds, which could make you say he was even worse than voldemort but opinions are meaningless to the viper. Hes not aiming to be the only god, but he will destroy anyone foolish enough to make him his enemy- which defintely makes him better than some gods (ambitions)

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He's like a more successful and charismatic Voldemort who isn't a psychopath with a shattered soul. A net positive on all accounts!

James Squibb

He was depressed in his own realm. But he was still trying some experiment with the stone of his lover. So maybe?

Catherine

Or ‘rumours abound’

Lazy Lemon

"Do they think I have merely wallowed in despair ?" I mean has he not ?

Jonathan

“Thirdly, rumors have been abound. rumors have abounded. (have been bountiful or rampant, or plentiful.)

BrokenMortal

Hype!! Thx for the chapter

Bryce

So good

Tilen Praprotnik

Thanks for the chapter

Zogarth

Fixed

Alexander Hallonblad

Thanks for the chapter, so excited! "The demon looked at for a while," at it? "VIlastromoz" x3 Vilastromoz?

Ben

Been waiting for this speech to come and boy did it not disappoint! Easily one of the best chapters to date XD

Darune Albane

😁 👹

Green Steve

I felt The giggles rise up from those words. Amazing chapter as always!

Dont_like_to_Talk

The End of this chapter is just amazing. Thanks for all these great chapters.

Jordan

Now that's how you end a chapter.

Jason Bryant

Pog


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