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Chapter 523 - Just Sand-Witch Things

🕑 Added 2022-08-08 10:40:44 +0000 UTC

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Aaron Hardin

This whole thing by the Alliance screams overreach, with them trying to take everyone else off the board at the same time without softening up anyone first. It’s a great way to have everything suddenly collapse as you have spent all your resources trying to hold more territory than you can handle while being attacked from too many directions. They would have been better served attacking two of either the risen, the church, and the court of shadows at this time. Ignoring Jake, it is clear the Alliance did not put enough into the attack on the court of shadows, a group that specializes in assassination, leaving a bunch of angry assassins able to target the leadership of the Alliance shortly.

Lorraine V

Ty

Thatguycant

I don't know I think once jake takes care of things and gets the experience he needs I would be shocked if Villy doesn't just wreck Yip in order to take care of any loose ends. especially since the guy's shown he's clearly not afraid to pick a fight with him and Villy not the type to just let that go.

Eloren Koori

The god probably not, his chosen...most definitely.

Hayden Leech

Yuck. Nah.

Björn Hermans

as long as the stupid yore god dies in the end i have no problems with this arc xD

Björn Hermans

i just need jake to evolve his step und just pop up next to these yore fuckers... and i want to see this yore god DIE! if the arc ends there in the end i whould love it xD

Grumble

So many different things going on. Sword Saint fighting, Casper and the risen losing, Miranda taking the refugees to safety, Caleb and the shadow guys hiding, Jacob being removed from the board by his own side, Crazy William returns, the Fallen King fight, World Congress 3, WTF Arnold?!, RIP Chris, and Jake playing in the sand. Looking forward to the next few weeks!

Seen Death

Ty for chapter! P lame some readers cant take a step back to see the larger picture though. For example: given jakes personality, what qualities would one need to actually be loathed by jake? A poop throwing mushroom slaver? This 'new' guy seems to have stirred the pot on a global scale- meanwhile jake is one of the very few to know the culprit (although he is the main target). I definitely look foward to seeing how this unfolds...

Thomas Payne

Nice story, I like the buildup

Zogarth

I don't see it.

Chris

I'm interested in learning more about this arc. UCA is making their move and we have no background / knowledge of the plan. Same as Jake btw. So we get to learn about it as Jake and others learn more.

Chris

poor justin, two hard 'no' replies. atm with 8 and 3 likes, while his comment sits at zero likes.

Sterban Friz

Not at all

The 49th Khan

No

Swaggernaut77

Man y'all need to fuckin chill. Man's has already killed 2 of the enemy's top dudes without majorly sweating and y'all actin like Jake is done when it's only been 2 chapters l. Y'all need to have patience for setting the stage lmao. Acting like Jake is stagnating or something. - 🐍gang

Justin van mele

Who thinks this story would crossover great with mother of learning. Maybe a bit after Kirielle graduates from the mage academe there world gets integrated.

good guy

The story is starting to feel disjointed. What Jake is doing is not adding to the progression of the story and that is why I am dissatisfied. Some details about what Jake is specifically trying to improve would fix this for me.

Azur Kris

I wonder what Mirandas last spell did. Some type of telephatik message to all citizens? Did she maybe record the earlier conversation and send it to a large part of the population as a daydream?

BloodStorm

If something happens to Jake’s family I could see Villy telling him to do a would sacrifice ritual


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