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Chapter 525 - Making (Unpleasant) Business Deals

🕑 Added 2022-08-10 10:34:31 +0000 UTC

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Kirivina

@Brotato that is entirely accurate and wonderful word smithing.

Brotato

Arthur is like a puppet looking up at his own strings and marveling at his ability to make the puppeteer's hands move

gray matter

This is definitely a “business deal” umbra and valhal are going to lose out on overall. I’m surprised they underestimate a being worthy of waking up primordial who has been dormant for over 80 eras and made a chosen. It seems too risky for so little gain on their part

Thenais

William is the true MC since day 1

Lorraine V

Ty

Duder

Vahal

Omy Sadat

Must have been that RNG Primordial and his shenanigans. There's no other way around. Other option would be easily cowed or dumb assassins, which wouldn't give a lot of explanation for the orders age.

good guy

Booooring

Thundermike00

Our mcs father? Author is jacobs father. And Jacob is not the mc.

Ryan Taylor

You can't be assasins on one of the prime planets in the new universe if you have someone like Arthur in control. That is the point. This is a literal war. No intelligent entity makes that deal. Let's say everything goes perfectly for Arthur. Ell'Hakan does exactly like he expects, the undead and Holy church (who he is a hypocrite for working with against the undead btw) gets chased off, and he is put in charge. Jake and Haven are forced off the board. Who is now the only threat to Arthur? The Court of Shadows. It makes literally no sense to work for someone who is 100% going to stab you in the back later and the literal GOD of assasins would know that. This was just bad writing to make an already bad arc more believable. Which is all the worse because this is one of my favorite stories from Royal Road and the only Author I support on Patreon. It's unbelievable. Any God would have either forced the Court into full hiding, left them to figure it out themselves, or pushed for Arthur's head to hit the floor. Not only that, but to potentially piss off the most powerful 2 people on the planet ( the Sword Saint and Jake) at the same time by allying with the guy that caused the deaths of their people is also a bad look. The Court gets nothing here but credits (which they probably aren't lacking btw) and bad blood. There is no real upside to that move

Storyhunter

This new arc is likely to end with our mc in the leadership over earth..... His father is setting this up without realizing it. All his opposition is squaring off and the people who would tolerate his ascension are essentially on one side or like to fight. I am curious where the swordsman's clan falls on this conflict. I expect however he won't be bribed he would likely be excluded trapped elsewhere for the duration.

Matthew Robinson

Do we know who Arthur’s patron is? I could have sworn I read that he had one but couldn’t find it.

Adam

Would the system let a contract happen that a bloodline could easily break? Also wonder what Ell’Hakan is after that won't impact humanity too negatively in the long run.... Note how he says humanity, and not earth. Just how long is the long run?

Nicholas Paterson

and Holy Church will gladly make use -> and the Holy Church and you operate no not based on faith -> operate not based Notable absent was anyone Caleb actually knew. -> Notably absent

Ron Whitlatch

What? Did you not see see the part where his god stepped in? When Arthur said he's fine with gods being on top? When it was made clear that the Assassins are just that, Assassins

Ryan Taylor

Judge or not, Caleb should have killed or imprisoned Arthur on the spot. He is a power hungry megalomaniac who I can only equate to a dictator. He was a literal traitor to earth as soon as he brought Ell'Hakan on the planet to kill people. And what he is doing threatens not only his friends and family, but the Court of Shadows as well. What happens when the Court is the only power left on the planet that can challenge Arthur? He'll crush it under the guise of 'putting humanity first'.

Johan Karpantschof

I love this arc. Keep it up!

Davis

Smugly manipulative enemy is so boring. I hope this arc ends soon.


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