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Chapter 838 - Nevermore: Infernal Baron

🕑 Added 2024-01-29 11:39:17 +0000 UTC

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Olof Karlsson

Thanks for the chapter!

Greymantle

I agree. I enjoy seeing Jake discover new abilities--like what happened during his final fight with Valemar--but I pretty much skip over the sections when he is exploring various ways to develop new abilities. Such an exploration would only be interesting to me if I actually lived in Jake's fantasy world and followed a path similar to his, which I alas don't. I'd thus instead like to see more dialog/character interaction/plot advancement.

ABTelford

Snippet I loved: “as the saying goes, the customer is always right. Unless when the customer is a fucking idiot, in which case they are probably rarely right about anything.” Hahaha!!! Loved this bit!

No need to name it, would be very surprised if it isn't HWFWM ^^

Yaldabaoth

🤘🤘🤘🤘 Lessss goooooo!!!??

Rudeus

You should just consider this whole Nevermore arc as a training arc. Yes, long and partly boring but necessary for the progression (since he's just a peasant in terms of larger scales). Tho when you think about it, the whole novel could be summarized as a training arc so this excuse is kinda so-so :d

JC

Ya, the way i think about it is that were at chapter 838. Nevermore started at ~650. Almost 1/4 of this entire novel has been about nevermore where almost nothing has happened plot-wise. 1/4 of this entire novel could be summed up to a changed status screen. Like it blows my mind that zogarth hasnt just gotten bored of writing this nevermore arc already.

MacMahon Wenzl

I like to read the full books or listen to the audio books too and I can't help but think about what the series will be like. Books 1-9 lead up to Nevermore but books 9-18 will just be about Nevermore, or that's what it seems like at this rate. The tutorial took 2ish books but he did multiple dungeons, challenge dungeons and had the war/ schemes of the other players. Nevermore just seems to be dragging at this point in comparison.

JC

Im not a huge fan of these challenge dungeons amymore. The colosseum was nice. Labyrinth was ok but we all knew jake was going to destroy it. architect was boring imo. Now im just at the point where i want this whole nevermore arc to end. The plot hasnt really moved forward much since it started and theres no emotional weight or consequences to any of this. Theres not even a fear of failure or death. The rivalry with Ell'hakan was under utilized too. I get that this novel is more about the journey and not the destination but weve basically been in a low progression training arc for 200 chapters now...

Isley

good chappie

Mack

Great chapter!!

Mack

Personally I can do without hearing from her again 😜

James Faulkner

Awesome chapter, Tftc!

Martin Hájek

I need some comments from the peanut gallery, too long since we heard from Artemis… love the budding thing there.

frankie doerr

Minaga maze only because of the commentary

DirePants

Great chapter! I largely just skimmed Test of Character and Minaga’s Maze. There was no real advancement of plot of character development. But peeking on other characters was very nice. Could always use more of that since you make such well developed characters that you miss them when they’re not around. The Colosseum was great but more than a little longer than I felt it needed to be. But had some of the best plot development at the end. House of the Architect was great! Plenty of character development and seeing a thoughtful and introspective side of Jake we haven’t seen since the tutorial. So far I’m liking the Endless Journey. It’s moving at a nice pace and it’s intriguing in the best way. It’s both answering questions and prosing new ones. You’re passing time while describing what Jake is thinking. Another LitRPG I’m reading (I won’t name it because I won’t disparage it like this) has a bad habit of spending whole consecutive chapters just listening to the protagonists thoughts on various issues like his troubles with skills, the world, goals, or the current situation with little and often no progression in the story. Makes me feel ripped off. Anyway- great job! Glad I finally caught back up! Looking forward to where this goes.

I bet this job was a test to find a trustworthy courier

Ral

Jake minorly upgraded his mile step to include things like a swimming stroke, or a wing flap. We haven't seen him move that way since the water level though.

Tommy

Thanks for the chapter!

Ral

Hot take: 1 Minaga's maze 2 House of the architect 3 test of character 4 colosseum of mortals

TKOva

He starter and ended with the strongest ones. With the middle ones being more filler and directed towards Jake's friends and allies.

Matthias

Tftc

Jason Hardman

Yeah speed that one myself. Thought it funny that the double negative changed the entire intended meaning.

Elijah Reitmeier

Yep. Should be “based on how none of the C-grade beasts he passed reacted at all” or “based on how, out of all the C-grade beasts he passed, none reacted at all.”

Elijah Reitmeier

This right here folks. One of the only reasons to be happy about a Monday morning. Tftc Zog!

Decibel790

Thanks for the chapter!

mitchell kaiser

What a fun ending!

Jonathan

At least they couldn’t, based on how none of the C-grade beasts he passed didn’t react at all despite Jake stepping down practically right next to them. passed reacted

Tftc! Love the current dungeon. Even though it's part of Nevermore, it doesn't have the same sense of drag especially the House of the Architect had.

Ty Cooper

Lol I know right. I actually look forward to Monday chapters

Ty Cooper

Branch Quest! Looks like this dungeon is about to be spiced up a bit.

Aidan

"based on how none of the C-grade beasts he passed didn’t react at all" the double negative makes the sentence feel uncomfortable to read

joel southard

Nice thank you for the chapter

Tucker Glick

This chapter is pretty lit

Kaibutsu

Hot, in more ways than one.

JJMand

My rankings for the 5 challenge dungeons so far. Rankings only based on how much I personally enjoyed reading them. 1: Endless journey 2: Colosseum of mortals 3: House of the architect 4: Minaga’s maze 5: Test of character.

StuBee3

Cool! TFTC 😎

Naotsugu97

TFTC! It lessens the existential pain of a Monday morning.

brennon Petersen

Tftc!

Alex R

Things are heating up.

JJB4345_80_815

Yes, thank you for the chappy, Zogarth!

Michael Underwood

Thanks for the chapter. It’s getting interesting!

Dave

Nicee

Pip Mitchell

Love it

Strato Junon

Getting spicy. Tyfc!

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter


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