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Chapter 839 - Nevermore: Special Side Job

🕑 Added 2024-01-30 11:45:23 +0000 UTC

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ByLordMatsLuck

A Duke’s lands and holdings are more commonly referred to as a Duchy just FYI

Hunter Thornton

Welp people. I believe Jake has just multi classed into rouge

kyle

I'm glad it took this turn! Much funnier to read!

Alessan

The Duke can’t easily leave his residence but casually came to visit his son?

Olof Karlsson

Thanks for the chapter!

ABTelford

Friendly edit: ”I showed no disrespect, merely the professionalism I was hired to display,” Jake said in an as professional voice as he could.“ this needs to change to be “…Jake said in as professional a voice as he could.”

Michael Meyer

i think that it should have been more like the labyrinth. short sweet and overpowered

KenTX325

Based on the number of chapters it would be 2 full books. 45 chapters or half a book in the coliseum alone.

justin

I get your point but I havemy doubts that the results are going to be worth the wait. Juice just ain't worth the squeeze so far... I do think these types of stories benefit from time jumps. I do think that power up side arcs are needed to space our the main line and help with narrative tension. My main point is, this has gone on too long for general audience. I don't think content should ever be thrown away. I would just trim the main line and add companion supplements short stories or collections for the hard core fans.

Ricardo Henriques

Yup while the Nevermore Arc was a good idea as a concept it didn't work when executed, mostly in my opinion the (training) arc becomes too long and during it the main history didn't progress at all.

Chris

I’m teetering on the edge with respect to the series. The story over all is compelling, but Nevermore’s continued pace similar to the speed of molasses flowing down a tree caught in a time warp, isn’t doing the story credit IMO. To me, it serves to primarily diminish the cohesion of the story, delay progression of the story, and provide little valuable substance to anything really. Running the chapters through an AI summarizer could likely provide a reasonable and worthwhile time sensitive diversion into Nevermore while the main storyline promptly continues. As others have suggested I’ve taken to waiting and periodically skimming the Nevermore chapters. The problem is they keep coming. I really do value the Authors efforts in what is one of my favorite literary RPGs, but I’m loosing faith in the long-game here, something that is not without its disappointment for me, as a ardent fan of the series. I’m glad so many are in the enjoyment camp, but it’ll be interesting to see if that maintains course outside of us patrons over the long run. I fear that it will not.

Ral

A lot of these dungeons are really nice and tell you what the objective is.

Seen Death

Nevermore is a key role in the multiverse, and Jakes progress. You might view it as "unrelated" to the outside world because of the false worlds and scenerios here, but it is hugely impactful. To show your viewpoint in a more broad manner, how do you take movies/games/books seriously, when they are also "false worlds and scenerios"... it feels much better to just let yourself get immersed. Nevermore might have some downtimes while settling into a new area/challenge but i think its been very entertaining. From what i understand, this is more of an issue with you not letting yourself enjoy the story.

Seen Death

I am also chappy happy

Ansordia

NOW that would make even Eversmile, smile a little ;P

Zayn Bakir

We got Jake 007 here

DirePants

This is a great learning experience for Jake. He’s used to being very chill about everything. He’s based af ya know? But now he has to play a roll in a deadly game of thrones 😉 lol very interested to see how he plays this or if he’ll get bored and just cheese it 😂

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter!

Mantiqore

And the gods. I wanna see them roast him

Yaldabaoth

Looking forward to the chaos about to happen, with Spy Jake 🕵️‍♂️ 🎵🎼Dudududu! Spy Jake!🎼🎵

Arkenian

I actually think this could be interesting and useful for jake. In the real world Jake only interacts with higher grades as the chosen of the malefic viper. This let's him experience a more normal experience of a c grade involved with higher grade stuff

Néstor Rocha

As Anthony mentioned it all has to do with records. To simplify, picture records as an empty, roofless tower. The more records you have, the taller and sturdier it becomes. Experience is like water. You can fill you tower with experience and the higher it gets, the higher your level is. But once you get to the top of the tower, you cannot level up anymore and exp just becomes useless. You then need to acquire more records. You do this by doing hard and unique things, especially if they're related to your path. Get titles, conquer dungeons, evolve skills, kill something of a way higer level than you, discover something unique. etc. It was expained to Jake that he hasn't had this problem because he's always maintained a large buffer between his records and exp, and that it's inadvised to power level. He could maybe get to b grade from all the records he's accumulated, be he would stagnate eventually. Remember the Wrath spirit a bit ago? It killed billions if not trillions and levelled up like crazy, but eventually became unable to level up any higher because he did not have enough records.

Patrick Ferguson

From my understanding it's based on your records. If you reach the limit of your records then it becomes near impossible to level or rank up. However that doesn't mean you can't get new or more records to increase this. So in essence Jake is right however simplified he made it.

Scott Schluter

With that said, I have been and am enjoying the hell out of most of Nevermore.

Scott Schluter

My suggestion to Zog would be to consider making Nevermore a novella or companion novel that's not necessarily part of the main storyline.

Will Murry

Called it.

Doggos R. Puppers

Spy Jake is going to be a fucking disaster yet no one is going to yo realize it except himself. So excited

KenTX325

I like books that have a plot and character development. None of that is happening in these challenge dungeons.. Jake isn’t getting experience, levels or risking anything. You have to remember this is Patreon members not the average Amazon reviewer. I think they will be less tolerant of 45 chapters in a challenge dungeon. The pace would probably be better if not reading a chapter at a time but I still cringe when something happens that will extend the time in Nevermore. I’m ready to move on.

JJB4345_80_815

Maybe the Wrymgod has an image of Eversmile stashed away in this challenge dungeon? Wouldn't it be awesome for Jake to defeat the images of TWO Primordials while in Nevermore?

JJB4345_80_815

Jesse broman, chill out dude. BTW, hi I am part of nobody apparently! Just because you feel a certain way doesn't mean everyone else feels the same. Granted, the Nevermore arc is long and it's hard waiting for the conclusion but I wanna know stuff still! What achievement is Jake going to get for this challenge dungeon? What is the reward for averaging a 20% achievement across all 5 challenge dungeons? How did Jake do vs his colleagues and opponents (specifically Ell'hakan)? Can Jake and his crew cheese some of the following floors? Will Jake finish atop the Leaderboards and how does that compare to other eras? Will we get more God TV and what will be their reactions? What level is Jake going to end up at while finishing Nevermore? In order to give proper answers to those questions Zogarth has to be diligent in his storytelling otherwise the answers will be unfulfilling and hollow. Everybody wants dessert but too many empty calories can deteriorate one's health.

Mimic

this is pretty cool

justin

Half the chapters in nevermore I would remove if I was an editor. But I do agree if I was reading all at once it would be ok. I also want to get back to what is happening on his planet and with his people.

Namorat

I don't want to read the crap you could come up with, to be honest. If you don't like the current arc, step back for some time as others suggested.

JJB4345_80_815

Yes, I'm happy for the chappy too, Zogarth!

Jonathan

with the strongest fighting force of the entire kingdom being part of the duke factions or directly under the king. forces as does all those officially part of the dukedom. as do if they had no one to take their place? his place. The Duke already said 'his' lifespan was running out.

Anthony Duenas

Basically it's indirectly about the risk but not always. Leveling has to be supported by records, and the best source of records usually comes from difficult tasks. Anything difficult that's combat related would inherently be a risk.

Nepene

I thought this was a great chapter. Zogarth, out of curiosity, is this chapter meant to show that the duke and other A rankers can't act in the open?

Bent Sommer

A bit harsh, but I have my fair share of problem to get excited for an artifical dungeon. Nothing what happens in there matters after finishing it 😓

Jeff McCulley

I found the Colosseum tediously lengthy, and hope this doesn’t turn into the same. That said, not only does this dungeon’s storyline seem better…it’s quite apparent there are people aplenty enjoying it.

joel southard

Nice thank you for the chapter

Den

Speak for yourself

1FantasyFanatic

One thing I have been confused about. Do people in the story have hard limits? Like the story has had several mentions of individuals reaching their limit. Does that mean it is physically impossible for them to advance or is it like what Jake was saying and all they need to do is go complete some risky quests?

Zogarth

Fix

Thenais

BFD - big fucking dump

David Thomas

Eh, I disagree. I actually really like it. Expecting a story to follow a specific direction you want it to, is a recipe for disappointment. Journey before Destination and all that…

Jack

With nobility seeming like its going to be a big thing in this dungeon i feel like jake is gonna get some use out of his kingslayer title

Naotsugu97

Thanks for the chapter! Paragraph 18 has rolling r practice! “due to the Recorrds in the item” 😄

brennon Petersen

Tftc!

Ansordia

Novel experience INDEED... I would be pumped in this situation ESPECIALLY as it has no real consquence.... Like I think system fuckery would even fix Jake if some Karma shit happened to him that an A grade did to him... adleast that would make the most sense.

S.w.

Jake vs PETA!

Frederik

many people still have crap to give so I suggest you just stop reading for a few weeks and wait for nevermore to end befor reading again

Aidan

I enjoy nevermore. I mostly wish I had the whole book rather than infrequent chapters that piecemeal the story to you, but that's exactly what you sign up for on patreon.

Gavin

Jake as a double agent is gonna be an experience. He isnt exactly subtle but overall this is gonna be a fun arc

Joseph Coonelly

"impossible due to the Recorrds in the item and the difficulty" Recorrds-Records "keeping others down to remain strong in comparrison" comparrison-comparison Thx for the chapter!

Karim Saadi

I am happy with the pace if Jake finishes this dungeon around the end of next week (barring any especially cool/interesting plotlines coming up). I don't care much about political stories of an artificial dungeon. I pretty much skipped some parts of the dungeon level with the demon stuff, everything else I enjoyed very much though.

Ikawaii

:(

Rolf

Thank you for the chapter! Small typo found: «comparrison» should be «comparison»?

Dave

Bro, don’t yuck my yum.

Thanks for the chapter

Decibel790

Thanks for the chapter!

Gnothi Seauton

Jake is gonna go to a bar and ask for a martini, shaken not stirred, and introduce himself as Jake Bond. Spy time!

Itsigu

Tftc!

kiwi

yay

Jesse B.

Bro, get tf out of nevermore already, nobody gives a crap anymore, its garbage. At least try to make it interesting with time skips and different pov's.

Nate Oppy

Hehe

Overlord1993

Tftc

Jake Schmitz

Happy Chappy!!


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