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Chapter 844 - Nevermore: Miscalculation

🕑 Added 2024-02-06 12:02:51 +0000 UTC

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Olof Karlsson

Thanks for the chapter!

Marvin bennett

Do to the planet being like d or c grade

Marvin bennett

I thought because when val mentioned what grade the beast or boss for the world it wouldn't be higher than c grade

Numbzy

Planets aren't rated in PH. From my understanding, records are the number 1 blockage for advancing, not the energy/mana levels/size of a planet. Though larger planets due seem to have a higher capacity for generating more record because of just more living beings. There was scene where it was mentioned that Valdamar's home planet kept giving birth to S-Grades because of the records that Valdemar himself left here just by growing up there.

Michael Meyer

same

Michael Meyer

yeah fr

Swaggernaut77

I love it when Jake goes full theater

Zadumu

I get where you’re coming from. The long expositions and fact that Jake gains nothing other than points is sure to make this a slog for some readers. However, I’m really enjoying the plot and genuinely want to see how it turns out. In comparison I enjoyed house of the architect less because there wasn’t really a story and mainly consisted of crafting exposition. I think like most readers though, I will be quite happy when the challenge dungeons are completely done.

Daniel is ŁØNE

Probably not, once this challenge dungeon is over we will have covered the important parts pf the experience that would decide the outcome of the leaderboard. After the challenge dungeons are done we will probably get some time skips every 2-3 chapters until the entire thing is over.

TwistedVanity

I really enjoyed that

Justin

Some of you really need to lay off the white knight routine. Just because the author may see your comment isn't a reason to throw sound logic to the wind and be sycophants. These Nevermore chapters are well past tedious, and there is too much repeat filler. Stop telling people who pay a monthly fee for 5 chapters a week to not read 5 chapters a week. That's the same as telling them to unsubscribe to the Patreon.

Bobby B

I’m hoping Zogarth makes the entire Nevermore experience a separate series or stand alone novel. Otherwise the next 2 books will be nothing but Nevermore. Not a thrilling prospect. I will probably wait to buy my next book when the story continues after nevermore.

joel southard

Nice thank you for the chapter

Marvin bennett

Question is Earth still upgrading it's rating? Like d or c grade

Isley

good chappie

Charles Torry

My favorite part is how all the NPCs were telepathically talking down to him and calling him stupid.

JJB4345_80_815

Yes, thank you for the chappy, Zogarth!

Mohammed Sheekh

absolutely agree, I'm a patient person but when the plot is stuck in the same place for 2 weeks, it will eventually tear into my patience, just imagine how the non patreon readers will feel 🤣

John Balman

Sighs, I love the chapter, but damn these cliffs

Mack

Noice!

michael pigott

Honestly pretty on brand for Jake to not do the best at political manipulation but still get his way because his personal brand of absurdity managed to win over the guy that could kill everyone in the room without too much effort.

Ben Heystek

loved it!!!!!! cant wait til the next chapter to see how this all unfolds

Jaklelope

Tyftc

Allie

Love this one

David Thomas

Ye olde snafu-roo

Anthony Duenas

I hope the novel is trimmed up a bit, as i still plan on buying them. I've been caught up for a long while I'm not saying what I'm saying because I suddenly can't binge or something dumb like that. I don't even mind cliffhangers. Im just looking at the chapters objectively without playing weird waiting games so my perspective is skewed. Objectively speaking, in my opinion, the 4 chapters before this one felt like 2 chapters that both got split. This chapter felt ok in terms of the plot moving forward, but if this chapter and the previous 4 (5 altogether) had been done in 3, there would be an actual cliffhanger instead of just another half step

Decibel790

Thanks for the chapter, and a very funny cliffhanger lol

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter

Jeremy Durbin

The pacing of the content feels less drawn out when you don't have to wait between chapters. Building a buffer then reading through it usual helps with placing feeling slow and the chapter ends less cliff like as you move straight to the next chapter without delay.

Adurna

You have a point on the repeat info-dumps. They are getting like a Chinese serial in density. I can only imagine they will be even more obnoxious once published. For the rest I do enjoy a bit of posturing and reactions as things are revealed, although the amount per chapter is a bit low with those dumps.

Anthony Duenas

How would that change the content in the chapters. There could be another 100 chapters ready and I would still have the same opinion. Might be better if you didn't suggest people stop reading, and by extension stop supporting Zogarth.

Jason Hardman

Might be a better experience for you to take a break and come back when the story has moved forward, and have a nice binge read to catch up.

Sam Rosenberg

Wow. Just keeps getting more and more messy. Great chapter

Cindy Canuel

The anticipation for the end of the challenge and Jake’s final score is killing me… (and I enjoy every minute of it haha).

Anthony Duenas

I was specifically referring to this challenge dungeon, I said nothing about the others. Maybe you could argue the Architect was a bit long, but that's you bringing those up. This challenge dungeon is at a crawl.

Yaldabaoth

LesssGooooooo!?

Chrisbirdie

Hard disagree. I feel like these are Dungeons that are the main factor in deciding who will get the high score in nevermore so its fine they are more fleshed out. Plus its not like Jakes progress apart from his levels has stopped while he was in there, he got a bunch of new skills, Figured out more about his bloodline, was able to fight fucking Valdemar without it being towards the end of the novel. And it resulted in a lot of comedic moments especially with Minaga. I feel like if at all the Colosseum dungeon and the Architect dungeon coudve been a bit shorter but thats about it.

Archmage37

Tftc Well Jake might think he made the wrong decision but I think the King will soon find himself in the hot seat

Chrisbirdie

Im 99% sure this will be the end of the courier dungeon. If he were to fuck this up and get killed by for example not getting the support of the Founder I imagine he would just get reset to some checkpoint or something along those lines.

Anthony Duenas

I enjoy Nevermore but this challenge dungeon is getting milked dry. It feels like the last 5 chapters could have been done in 2, maybe 3. To much extra fluff or repeat info dumps, for what feels like the sake of word count.

Piers Wilkinson

That smile at the end was a total shit eating grin and we know it 😂

Ty Cooper

So after the party what will happen to Jake? He just keeps doing the courier jobs? It sounds like he was to be killed or demoted to the bottom rungs again with shame or something. It feels like the end of the dungeon. Like you will keep doing the same story till you leave all the special jobs alone. Because they didn't plan on having anyone like Jake come through the dungeon.

Rad

Next chapter is the finding out.

The Tallest Tree

Politicians willing to throw everyone but themselves under the bus only to unleash a surprised pikachu face when they get dragged down beneath the weight of their own schemes... never fails to entertain

Zogarth

Fix

Zogarth

Fix

Charles Torry

*Doom music plays*

Tyler S.

And for another twist, this was all a set up by the Founder to get at the King and gain the support of the Lord Protector. Then having rid their planet of corruption they can finally start on the next step of making a universal courier service 😁😁

Detrox

It was that moment the king knew, he fucked up.

BumAssBumAss

"you underestimate yourself" Should be overestimate right?

Hodge Wasson

Super hyped for next chapter. What a great setup.

Naotsugu97

The last paragraph brings to mind a certain scene. “Excuse me while I whip this out”!

forgetfulposum

"with the Founder continually getting ignored despite standing right now to him." I think it should be "right next to him" "However, Jake soon realized things why things were going so wrong" One "things" too many

brennon Petersen

Tftc!

Yaldabaoth

69 likes.... noice 😎

Michael Fannon

Ah, the fucked around moment as a cliffhanger. Well done sir. Well done.

Den

As Mr Crocodile Dundee eloquently put: "That is your backing? *This* is a backing".

Gavin

Whew that reveal. Gagged them! 😂

Pablo Barbatto

Jake most have the biggest Grin

Valhazstromoz

Congratulations Mr king............you done goofed

Thanks for the chapter!

Nate Oppy

Woooooooo

Overlord1993

Tftc

BumAssBumAss

Thanks for the chapter!


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