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Fat Nagatoro and President
🕑 Added 2022-07-23 18:32:46 +0000 UTCHere are some WIPs of the July poll winners, Nagatoro and President from Don't Toy With Me, Miss Nagatoro! Since both characters won, I decided to draw them both, squishing their bellies together. I have made two sketches, one at a top-down angle, and a standard angle. I feel the standard angle's legs are too long and the feet are too big. But what do you guys think?
Feedback is appreciated!
I'll be working on belly fuck alts soon!
EDIT TWO: No belly fuck edits yet, but I have made some changes to the base sketches, including a small variant of Nagatoro and President looking at each other intensely. I'm still getting used to the top-down angle, which might as well be a fish-eye lens angle lol. But yeah, feedback is appreciated!
EDIT THREE: Made some big changes on the girls. Their proportions of the legs, shoulders, and head position should be fixed.
EDIT FOUR: BELLY FUCK ALTS! Also added some unique faces for these ones.
EDIT FIVE: Sketched the BG!
EDIT SIX: LINE ART AND FLAT COLORS DONE!
Comments
BINGLE PRINGLE
For the high angle, maybe lean Prez in a little bit closer to Nagatoro.
HooliganFreak
How can I improve Prez's proportions for the high angle version?
Phat94
It might be nice if they're looking into each others eyes competitively. But go with what you like the most. I do think the legs are a bit long in the regular angle, and the proportions are a bit off on Pres in the high angle. But I'm really excited to see how these develop!
YodaOne
These are looking very sexy, I love how those bellies are looking
BINGLE PRINGLE
Yeah, maybe shrink the standard angleβs feet a little bit and it will be good. Also, add belly gurgles of course!ππΎπ
