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Fat Bunny Girl Shinobu WIPs

🕑 Added 2023-06-16 17:36:12 +0000 UTC

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YodaOne

Ah then nevermind, everything else looks fine

HooliganFreak

I mean, it should be, but what would you have done differently?

YodaOne

I meant the suit where the stomach is exposed lol. I may be wrong because it’s hard to tell in the third image

HooliganFreak

What do you mean? You’re looking at it right now! Lol

YodaOne

Well, would it be possible to have a reversed bunny suit alt? I think the zuri would look better with it. Other than that everything else looks great

HooliganFreak

Great to hear! Any fixes I should make before doing the line art?

YodaOne

Love how this turned out, I especially love the third alt

HooliganFreak

Thanks for the critique. By the way, is it the mouth like that, really? Because I never watched Demon Slayer either lol. As for the closed eyes, maybe I can replace the eyes I drew with those lol. Also, the angry veins mark and the scribble are only because I couldn’t decide, for I was rushing this out lol. Anyways, thx.

Phat94

Her body is looking great, I love her pear shaped figure, and how soft and doughy she is all over. Her belly roll and navel are super sexy, great work. I haven't seen the show properly so maybe a real fan can correct me, but her expression with the mouth open seems a little too cartoony? I thought she was more cool and collected. But I'm no expert. With the bellyfuck face, I wonder if it would be even more threatening if her eyes were closed. Wonder we only need one of the bothered scribble and the angery mark on her head? No big deal. Love how pissed she looks with her mouth shut as is. Rant over! Thanks for sexy fatties!