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Chapter 36: Leaving

🕑 Added 2020-12-15 21:15:01 +0000 UTC

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SunriseCV

You probably are. I added the first paragraph after Stephen’s comment.

SunriseCV

Hmm... I may be able to get by with Derek telling Thomas to make sure to choose the best available class at the beginning, like a suggestion that isn't a suggestion. I definitely see the problem..

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter:-) Fwiw, you'll probably get a fair number of comments that even with the in-story disclaimers, it's odd that Derek didn't insist on Thomas telling him all of his uncommon or better class options to choose from. Just doesn't make sense from the perspective of teaching him to be strong, especially given his fixation on weapons he's a poor fit with. Might work better if Thomas disobeyed the instruction to do so; everything else would still flow about the same.


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