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Story Changelog - 6/26/23
🕑 Added 2023-06-27 03:16:44 +0000 UTCSo every once in a while, I'll be writing and realize dang, I could've done that better. Sometimes, I'll feel it so strongly that I actually go back and change things right then! For that reason, I'm gonna make these changelogs to give yall a heads up about things.
I'll try not to do this too often - especially not for massive changes or plot details. Most chapters that just have wording fixes I won't even note. But there's some important things I wanted to fix here!
Beware, ye who haven't caught up - here thar be spoilers!
Cycle 1-8, 1-10, 2-5, and : Middle of Nowhere
- Shifted Kaitlyn's grades up slightly (maybe 10%, into the 30's for most of the bad failures). Still a convincing failure, but a bit less unbelievable.
Cycle 3-7: Get Rekt
- Minor text fixes
Cycle 3-8: The Results Are In
- Elliot is not part of Maze of Ills - instead, he's part of the (newly added) opening band.
- I'm still finalizing that band's name.
Cycle 3-9: Welcome to the Show
- Heather is still a fan of Maze of Ills but doesn't know the opener. That means she doesn't know who Elliot is.
- Heather and Kaitlyn's interaction after the concert is mostly unchanged.
- Heather still thinks Elliot is cute and wants Kaitlyn to invite him over.
Cycle 3-10: The Best Policy
- Minor text fixes
Cycle 3-11: Lonely Nights
- Added Kaitlyn's final grades for the loop
- Minor text fixes
More chappies will be coming out in just a bit here - making sure that I've ironed out all the major stuff before posting!
