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Chapter 142: Fortifications

🕑 Added 2024-12-31 18:48:16 +0000 UTC

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Daniel Hamilton

Great story, I’m enjoying the character progression as well as the base building and the problems that come with each. Giving us an oversight into his long term goal immortality, and the problems that surround it and the unique situation he’s in. I’m looking forward to the moment when he reaches E grade and gets a power spike and what it does for him. You have some good Villains set up (the better the villain, the better the story) do a good job mixing in others point of view and making the characters more 3-D so to speak with flaws, goals and motivation. Might want to consider putting the entire skill in bold and not just the title of the skill. Make it pop more as it’s important information. Just a thought. Keep it up. Great writing so far.

Snake With An Aurora Borealis

Thank you for the chapter! Happy New Year!

Sir Risen

This is a great book 😊

Corwin

Hopefully Thalion can shift to E grade soon

Barbara Collier

Happy New Year!

ReadingObsessed

That's the dream! 😁 Happy New Year!


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