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Chapter 180: A Good Teacher

🕑 Added 2025-02-21 15:56:02 +0000 UTC

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Joe garcia

I saw some negative comments on here and wanted to mention that the Josh and Jack sections are some of my favorite parts to liven things up between the dark and serious sections. If you're even still reading comments this far back.

ManguKing

Hahahaha same

hawkshe .

These Jack and Josh segments are definitely my least favorite part of the series. I've been seriously tempted to skip them, but I'm always worried I'll miss something important so I end up reading then anyway.

Burkholt

Some light feedback: I don't love reading Josh and Jack's antics. It feels so flat; it doesn't add much to the story or worldbuilding. And worst of all I end up skipping a lot of it. Some people might enjoy it, but for me, it got old quickly. The best analogy I have is that it's a filler episode that doesn't drive or enhance the plot/story further. That doesn't mean I don't enjoy your story because I most definitely do. And I thank you for writing it. And ultimately, just keep writing what you want regardless of anyone's opinion, that's how you get your best material.

Wanheda

I see where you’re coming from but I think it will feel much better placed once we get the next one and the next few after that and it shows we’re getting a peek at everyone before the showdown. It will read better when someone goes through these next chapters back to back.

Jan Ullrich

The chapter is ok just feels wrong reading placement (I am not sure where it could fit or if it builds up something, just feels odd with the others before)

Wanheda

Those two need their heads bashed together lmao.


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