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Chapter 02 (Healer)

🕑 Added 2025-03-24 00:47:03 +0000 UTC

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Amazon Shopper

could you make it in square brackets, italics, or some other indicator for that for clarity(at least when you edit it in the future?)

Johannes Röhrl

Description is from the alien interface. The other things are just his thoughts and assumptions of what he thinks will happen

Wanheda

A LOT of flowery flavor text on that spell description, is that actually coming from the alien's "system" or is this just his thoughts? Either way it seems very counter to both the aliens and his way of speaking. Not that it's bad, just that it feels very off for the situation. How does he know that Intelligence will boost his mana pool and regeneration? What is Wisdom doing then? If the system explained this a quick little "The system said it will boost ... " would make more sense. How does he know he will be able to get armor? I mean it's a fairly good assumption, but then he goes and says he may need to specialize in stats to wield gear, so does this mean that he would actually need toughness or strength or something to wield armor that would boost his toughness etc. Also, yeah, those guys are caricatures, and I hate them already haha. Hate them in a good way, not hate that you wrote them that way*

Barbara Collier

Next Chapter please?

M van Dongen

Ps. MOAR !

M van Dongen

What idiots. I've *never* felt bad about having a healer in my party. Never. How could anyone choose archer without knowing a way to restock arrows *exists* at all ......

maarten van der kaaden

Looks like fun

Maxime Cusson

This looks very promising 😁

Dragon of Destruction

Thanks for the chapter! Great job! I'm already invested, and this is only the second chapter.


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