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Chapter 208: Rematch

🕑 Added 2025-04-02 11:54:07 +0000 UTC

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Richard Reid

Multiple points of views are fine and even necessary in a truly massive battle.

Jennifer Leigh

We readers don't need to know everything that's happening in the background. You will have to keep track of stuff for writing but I'd limit the number of extra views. Major players every now and then as the tension builds was good. Now that most everyone is in the fifth stage, I'd limit it to individuals you care about. Maybe the undead council after this battle, a look at whatever the elves are doing, and another glimpse at the backstabbers. The people fighting against the disciple's rise will have to group up, or at least run into each other, soon. We can find out some of what's been happening then.

Barbara Collier

So many viewpoints and story lines. I can see how it would be hard but you weave masterfully.


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