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Chapter 18

🕑 Added 2024-02-13 23:06:14 +0000 UTC

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Incarnated Whisp

Thank you!

Kronos07

Thanks for the chapter! Edit Suggestions: "couldn’t help but to still be a bit nervous" -> "couldn't help but still be a bit nervous" "she snuggled closer to his stomach and make a satisfied noise" -> "she snuggled closer to his stomach and made a satisfied noise" "yelled for Cyndaquil to use her first move move" -> "yelled for Cyndaquil to use her first move"

Penguin Glutton

Also think Agatha would sponsor him when he becomes a more known ghost specialist?

Penguin Glutton

Thanks for the chap! I actually like that he lose the match growth and learning experience from this

James Nagy

I mean not really cause ghosts also can’t hit normal. Fighting has type advantage just needs more training.

Incarnated Whisp

Yeah, I'm trying to make Sam stand out from Alex, but writing over a million words of Alex means that it's easy to fall back into old habits. If you can point out any section that's especially egregious with its similarities or have any suggestions for improvements, I would greatly appreciate it.

Gordon

Tough loss, can't say it's not deserved Sam barely trained his mons and expected a miraculous win. Also Sam feels very similar to Alex, hope that some major differentiating characteristics appear soon

Drasolvent

I say losing to a Normal type is hilarious because it shows the drawbacks of not having any Ghosts on his Ghost team.

Incarnated Whisp

I wanted to include some basic calculations to help explain the outcome of the battle. To be clear, these are approximations, not cold, hard facts. The battles that take place in this story are different from the battles of the games, but they can still inform each other. Mankey’s attack against Teddiursa: Lvl 9 0 Atk Mankey Low Kick (20 BP) vs. Lvl 14 0 HP / 0 Def Teddiursa: 6-8 (13.3 - 17.7%) -- possible 6HKO Teddiursa’s attacks against Mankey: Lvl 14 0 Atk Teddiursa Fury Swipes (3 hits) vs. Lvl 9 0 HP / 0+ Def Mankey: 21-30 (75 - 107.1%) -- approx. 6.3% chance to OHKO Lvl 14 0 Atk Teddiursa Scratch vs. Lvl 9 0 HP / 0+ Def Mankey: 16-19 (57.1 - 67.8%) -- guaranteed 2HKO Teddiursa’s attacks against Cyndaquil: Lvl 14 0 Atk Teddiursa Fury Swipes (3 hits) vs. Lvl 12 0 HP / 0 Def Cyndaquil: 21-27 (60 - 77.1%) -- approx. 2HKO Lvl 14 0 Atk Teddiursa Scratch vs. Lvl 12 0 HP / 0 Def Cyndaquil: 13-16 (37.1 - 45.7%) -- guaranteed 3HKO Cyndaquil’s attacks against Teddiursa: Lvl 12 0 SpA Cyndaquil Ember vs. Lvl 14 0 HP / 0 SpD Teddiursa: 7-9 (15.5 - 20%) -- possible 5HKO Lvl 12 0- Atk Cyndaquil Flame Wheel vs. -1 Lvl 14 0 HP / 0 Def Teddiursa: 12-15 (26.6 - 33.3%) -- 0% chance to 3HKO Sum total: 70.9% to 91% done to Teddiursa. (Low Kick, Ember, Ember, Flame Wheel). 132.1% to 174.9% to Mankey. 97.1% to 122.8% to Cyndaquil.

Incarnated Whisp

Approximate damage calculations are included in reply to this comment. Patreon doesn't have spoilers, so hiding them this way is the next best thing.

Incarnated Whisp

I actually did the calcs. The important thing to note is that only Low Kick hit. Karate Chop was caught. I've included the values in another comment to help explain the outcome.

mhaj58

Good chapter, but I think that you overestimate Teddiursa, even a Karate Chop from a level 10 Mankey would have left Teddiursa too damaged to beat Cyndaquil even if it was level 15. I always liked the realism with the game mechanics so if I’m missing something let me know.

Steven

Thanks for the chapter


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