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Chapter 63

🕑 Added 2024-05-22 22:51:44 +0000 UTC

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Incarnated Whisp

That's a good question. I'll go back and add a short mention of it to these chapters before they're posted on Royal Road. The end results won't change, but it'll make more sense when it comes to settling the placements. Thank you!

Runaway_Cactuar

why wasn't there a 3rd place battle in the tourney?

Incarnated Whisp

I appreciate the feedback! I will do that instead if a need for a similar warning comes up in the future. Thank you!

Forint

Yeah, I think that works. Friendly reminder tho, if you want to talk about something in the chapter, like "this chapter is darker than usual but the story is not headed in that direction". Best done in post chapter notes.

Incarnated Whisp

Sorry. The first portion of the warning can definitely be removed. It's an artifact of an earlier version of the chapter that was a lot worse. I toned it down but left in the warning since I still had the mindset of the second half being a lot worse than it actually was. However, the second part of the warning should still be present, in my opinion, mostly because I would personally appreciate a warning like that when reading a Pokémon story. Pokémon are consistently shown to have near-human or human-like intelligence. Eating part of a Pokémon's body is much more morally questionable than eating an animal's body. It doesn't quite match the overall feeling of Pokémon, but it's an unfortunate necessity of the world.

Forint

You did a disservice to the readers by putting that warning there. 1. I had a tougher time focusing on the first half in anticipation of the second half. 2. The darkness is *mild.* So I was left disappointed, I e, the content didn't justify the warning. We're old enough for non vegetarian food lmao. It's canon too.

Sea Bass

I hope we can get Basculegion on the team eventually. They are one of the only Ghost types i can think of that can be used as a mount. It would be such a cool way for Sam to get around

Bakerdea

I was thinking about my favorite ghost Pokemon, and I remembered Alolan Marowak. I find it unlikely we'd see one on Sam's team though, that'd be two ghost fire types. Unless Sam wanted a defensive tank with extra move coverage. Shame though, because I LOVE Cubone!

Travis Elias

There was a definite void in my routine on Monday. Nice chapter, keep up the good work

Steven

thanks for the chapte


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