Incarnated Whisp
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Chapter is Delayed
🕑 Added 2024-05-31 22:00:01 +0000 UTCBut only by a few hours.
It needs to go through a few rewrites since the previous version was unrealistic and almost action movie-like. If you can't tell, there'll be a bit of a shift in the next update, but I don't want to completely turn the story on its head. It's going through extra rounds of editing to make sure it remains in-line with the rest of the story so far.
This post is mostly a courtesy to anyone in a different time zone. If it's late and you're waiting for the new chapter, sleep! You'll be able to read it in the morning!
(For everyone else, the update will still come out later today. It's just that it'll come out late enough past the usual target time that I felt the need to make this announcement post.)
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Incarnated Whisp
Chapter should be out within one more hour! I'm almost done, thank you for being patient!
Pandorasboxes
Fair enough!
mhaj58
I’m hoping to see some of the canonical characters soon. Lance and Agatha are obviously going to show up eventually but I wonder if we’ll see Red/Gold, Elm, or Lyra/Kris. I have enjoyed some of the characters but we haven’t seen any of the originals except for Mr. Pokemon
Incarnated Whisp
I'll bring up the most egregious scene in the post chapter author note!
Incarnated Whisp
I use Google Drive to write, so each chapter is in its own document. I could potentially pull out previous versions, but this chapter has been rewritten so many times, the previous versions were never edited.
Benjamin Lewis
Kind of curious about the action movie like chapter though 🤔 👀 Though I'm not sure how well it would mesh
Pandorasboxes
Take your time chapters redi when its redi! Also any plans on maby relesing some of the pre rewriten versions as what ifs or that not in the cards?
