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Chapter 47

🕑 Added 2024-04-12 23:48:44 +0000 UTC

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Incarnated Whisp

Thank you!

Kronos07

Thanks for the chapter! Edit Suggestions: "the phone connect to one back in Dewford" -> "the phone connected to one back in Dewford" "he looked back to the screen to see how his family and Sableye were reaction" -> "he looked back to the screen to see how his family and Sableye were reacting" "as he view was turned upside-down" -> "as his view was turned upside-down" "hoping that they were right he could lead them down, and hoping that Sableye was trustworthy enough to lead them to the bottom" -> maybe something a little less wordy like: "hoping that he had the skills to lead them to the bottom and that he was trustworthy enough to do so safely" "about a week ato" -> "about a week ago" "so of they were going to talk" -> "so if they were going to talk" "thumb’s up" -> "thumbs up" (x2) "A few stones and broke stalagmites" -> "A few stones and broken stalagmites" "He couldn’t make out any details other than the Lapras’s silhouettes" -> "He couldn’t make out any details other than the Lapras’ silhouettes" "You know, Lapras’s supposed to be a protected species" -> "You know, Lapras’re supposed to be a protected species" or "You know, Lapras are supposed to be a protected species"

Sea Bass

Damn now I really want Sableye on the team

Axel Geerts

Loved this one!

Pandorasboxes

This is was a fun chapter thanks!

Steven

Thanks for the chapter


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