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Chapter 87 (Updated!)

🕑 Added 2024-07-24 23:19:08 +0000 UTC

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Incarnated Whisp

I like Redi too, I'm just trying to balance the spotlight between her and Sam a bit more. My changes are me trying to nudge things around make Sam more active in his decisions.

Jazehiah

I'm not complaining. I love Redi! I'm glad she's getting time to shine.

Pandorasboxes

Its not a bad thing there are books with multiple main characters and i feel this one is shaping up to be the same way the trick is to balnce the two characters to give both of them agency in there own rights. Tho im not sure if thats the way your trying to go with this?

RiverusRomurus

I will take this as an opportunity to discuss Dreepy bc I can. In order to get a Dragapult you debatably need at least 3 Dreepy, and to get a Drakloak you need 2. As much as a Dreepy would be an interesting and fun pokemon to see Sam using, It'd be very difficult for him to get his hands on 3 in a reasonable time frame, or at least that's what I would say if there wasn't one important tidbit, Ghosts attract Ghosts, which means if sam gets his hands on a single dreepy it'd be reasonable to assume a communal ghost pokemon would be able to easily search and find members of its species. (or be searched for) But ofc 3 dreepy would have to be in the region for this to be feasible. And all of this operates on the fact you can't just replace the extra dreepy with a weedle missile. (Also honedge, I don't need to justify it though, perfect pokemon)

Incarnated Whisp

I'm hoping the next arc will help with that feeling. Fixed. Thank you!

Incarnated Whisp

I appreciate it. Thankfully, it isn't anything too bad, but it has made today a lot more annoying.

Incarnated Whisp

Fixed, thank you!

Jazehiah

Redi is the main character. Sam just gets to watch (and help) her meteoric rise. Edit suggestion: > you’ll have dozens of sponsorships being thrown your way, all of which that will look like pennies to the one Mr. Pokémon is offering you right now.” < Those sponsorships will *make* Mr. Pokemon's sponsorship look like pennies.

Pandorasboxes

Her watched her pick up the phone and dial. She hesitated before hitting the button to finalize the call. *he watched her

Pandorasboxes

Get better soon!!

Benjamin Lewis

Give them here, your Dragonair! Looking forward to the Blackthorn arc! Seeing the team grow and Redi play catchup on her team count is great. Also nice to see Sam hold on to his decisions and get some advice from mom.

Steven

Thanks for the chapter

Incarnated Whisp

I’m a little sick right now so a few parts of this chapter might feel off. If the dialogue doesn’t feel right or if there’s an obvious mistake, please tell me so I can fix it when I get the chance!


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