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Chapter 98

🕑 Added 2024-09-10 22:58:25 +0000 UTC

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Kronos07

No prob!

Incarnated Whisp

Just a heads up, something came up so Chapter 99 is going to be a bit delayed, but it will still come out tonight! EDIT: It will be up shortly! My apologies for getting it out so late at night!

Incarnated Whisp

Thank you!

Kronos07

Thanks for the chapter! Edit Suggestions: "A ghosts’s desires" -> "A ghost’s desires"

Jazehiah

It's going to be a very haunted bookstore. I think it will make an excellent ghost type "ranch."

mhaj58

How do Hoenn natives spawn in Johto? You might want to include some kind of clue about the store or owner. I’m thinking along the lines of Sam relating to the Duskull, while Quilava relates to the Shuppet. The idea is that the ghosts were people who wanted to be a pair who would go on a journey like Sam did with Cyndaquil, but never did, which is why Sam sent them to his mother.

Incarnated Whisp

I can add context about how the ghosts formed, but would you be willing to explain a bit more about what you mean by the bookstore?

mhaj58

Your chapter needs a little more context about the bookstore and how the ghosts formed. For Hoenn Pokémon to spawn in Johto means there’s a likely chance that the store might have more than meets the eye to it. Although I liked the lesson Morty was trying to teach Alex. Even after death, we need to heal before we can move on with our lives and afterlives

Authorii

Oooh, haunted book store. I love that

Steven

Thanks for the chapter


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