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Let's Talk about the Future

🕑 Added 2025-02-01 23:03:52 +0000 UTC

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Thomas Downing

I have loved this story since the start! Once you finish it, I hope you make a new one about a different Type specialist!

PlasmaticPi

Just wanted to add that the Dreepy thing seemed fine to me. I mean yeah its definitely a lucky break for him to have a chance to catch such a rare pokemon that's not Johto native. But at the same time everything else fits with the Team Rocket and Blackthorn Clan tie-ins. Like you made a really believable case as to why this could happen and why a Dreepy would ever even evolve.

MaliMi

Also surprised that the story will end so soon. If you want something else, then you could try post-journey or an si into a pokemon.

Runaway_Cactuar

I was shocked by the inclusion of Dreepy (and how the story kinda had to contort itself a bit to make it work), but if the story is ending at Conference, this makes sense. I really thought the story had the legs to go far, especially with the Oak/Pokedex thing. Heck, the Blackthorns could be set up as the next anti-progress Big Bad. But yeah, for the next story, I would recommend a different starting point than some teenager who's wet behind his ears. "Where the Moon Rises" had a great idea of a guy who finished his journey and became a Gym Leader. So maybe a generalist who just made E4/Champion and now has to run the League?

dragonslaver

Wow I really didn't expect the ghost specialist to end so soon. There are even a few plot lines still open with the new pokedex and its missing page for example. I also thought for sure that he wouldn't get through the whole league here and that there would be another run in hoenn since that's where he's from (Arceus please let me remember that right).

mhaj58

Rather than another type specialist story, a self insert legends story would be awesome. I was into a generalist but the number of Pokemon, characters, and people plot points to play with might be a nice way to go

Dark Oak

I think a story from a grunts perspective on what they would do next after their organization falls would be interesting.

Forint

I do wonder where Sam goes next. Also, if you want to try something different for the next story, you could always start post-game/post-journey/mid-level power ala hard enough. I'd like to keep the sanctity of legendaries, so a character who isn't a strong gym leader or a champion level trainer shouldn't really fuck with them.

PlasmaticPi

I'm genuinely surprised that the story is gonna end soon. I figured it would end at 2 or 3 times its current length, either due to another league arc after barely losing this one, or due to winning the league and going on a traveling spree to multiple other regions for two years with the main purpose of capturing more ghosts before taking on the elite four and Champion. I mean we have only really touched on 6 ghost type lines out of the nearly 40 non-legendary lines. Which him capturing something like Marshadow is definitely in the realm of possibility and could be an entire arc of its own.

Sea Bass

You make great work Whisp, can’t wait to see what you come up with next. An idea that might be interesting is a buddy cop series where Alex and Sam (having became a wandering elites as well in the time-skip) become reluctant partners. Both fics have shown they are not fond of each other’s types so there could be fun dynamics at play as well as character progressions. Tho enough of that tangent, whatever you do next will be great.

AkiCatR

Yeah, that's great. Was hoping for Bug Specialist next from you but if you are focusing on something else its cool too. I love your work.


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