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Elephant Town Chapter 11, page 8
🕑 Added 2022-04-25 04:15:41 +0000 UTC
(Not to ruin the lovey moment, but: this is one of those pages that I spent all week drawing and redrawing, only not know how to color it in the end. I'll almost certainly recolor this at some point, but for now, finished is better than perfect!)
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Danielle Corsetto
Aw thanks buddy!
The effort shows! Love the page panel composition as it relates to the story.
Danielle Corsetto
That is SO reassuring to hear, thank you! I didn't have a direct reference for that one, I just perused a bunch of "wedge sandal" ebay listings and asked my boyfriend to take a picture of his shoe rack!
Love it! The shoe portion looks so close to a photo it’s amazing!!!
NJGR
Ha, like the draft of my novel... I have ideas about needing to change some things for the better, but the how to do it is the real trick! - - Neal
Danielle Corsetto
Yeah, I think the direction is right, I just need to tweak values and saturation... and of course I have no idea how to do that. ;) Thanks, Neal!
NJGR
Love the tumbled unfolding of panels from top to bottom. Since you're mulling over the coloring, maybe something similar so it feels like a spectrum? Or a hint of the last panel's color in the first, and vice versa, since they inform each other? Just random thoughts on a first viewing. - - Neal
Hugh Eckert
Beautiful. Also, aww, so sweet...
Danielle Corsetto
I still have a lot of these in my office, but to me they scream COLLEGE NIGHTSTAND. :)
Danielle Corsetto
I agree. :)
Ruth Merriam
I hope they have his nose. That's some sexy jawline, Danielle.
Steve Boyko
I like the detail of the two pairs of shoes, side by side, together.
Julie Howard
Beautiful. Just beautiful. The darkness, the light - wow.
Gary Walker
This is really sweet.
Andy Ihnatko
I love the specificity of that nightstand. Great choice!
Laura J Testa-Reyes
I love the dress, tossed aside. Since we got to see it so much last week. And there are no panties. :)
