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Elephant Town Chapter 4 is up on the website!
🕑 Added 2022-07-06 04:58:05 +0000 UTCCompletely forgot to mention in the last post: Chapter 4 (our introduction to Miranda, incidentally) is up on the website!
If you were following here on Patreon when this chapter came out, you may notice a few small color shifts. I was really just getting my feet on the ground during this chapter, and I felt it deserved a few updates. If you catch 'em, I'll be impressed. ;)
Comments
Theadora
I love the touch of the reflection of the red light(s) on the collar of the spigot. Little detail FTW!
Minzoku Bokumetsu
I did notice the music and wondered how I missed that on the first run! (granted, it's a lot easier to catch things when bingeing than a page or two a week)
Danielle Corsetto
This made my morning to read!! <3
Danielle Corsetto
You know, you caught some small changes I made to that page years ago! I added the lips, and made the music visually "louder" than it was when that page first came out. Good catch! I actually want to redraw that "music" to look more similar to the chapter that follows it, for continuity.
David Neale-Lorello
I LOVE Miranda's color palette! It's the colors of my memories of my maternal grandmother's house and my earliest recollections, wandering as a toddler in the backyard of a Tucson military base. It deepens the poignancy of her invisibility and makes the perfect background to contrast Nicole against. Genius!
Damon Hart-Davis
Amazing!
Laura J Testa-Reyes
Just looked at the website, and I don't recall the music coming through the floor as she slept, so I think that is a whole new page. I do like it, how it will tie in later with the music at the party.
