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NYS2 Page 9 WIP (rough)

🕑 Added 2017-03-24 00:36:48 +0000 UTC

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marm

as reference, this is in vertical <a href="https://e-hentai.org/s/ad75890220/957996-12" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://e-hentai.org/s/ad75890220/957996-12</a> maybe horizontal would be better for the size involved with the aero

marm

Awesome ! Now for the usual suggestions/advices : I suggest to divide the central big panel into 2 or 3 depicting the slow but steady penetration of the second Flanker, meaning I wouldnt show a big panel with the dick already in but the way more sexy slow and unstoppable ( :D ) first the tip in, then half, then the dick completely in like in the big panel. Maybe in 3 horizontal panels instead than verticals, so u ahve more space for this vertical scene. With each panel having a dialog like moaning or pleading to stop. Also if u wanna include Quart's face in the final panel where the penetration is complete, I suggest her face should already be mouth open and eyes closed, a perfect sequel for her face in the top right panel where the penetration has started. (also I dont think anyone would manage to keep teeth grinding and eyes cold while being double penned) I think everyone wil agree with me that even if this takes more time to do, we have patience and the finalr esult will be amazing