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NYS2 Page 25 (Done)
🕑 Added 2018-06-27 21:48:30 +0000 UTC I meant to have this one done sooner, but I had a hard time with the dialogue. I really love how the second and third panels turned out though! <3This will be Patreon exclusive for today, and I'll post it up tomorrow!
Comments
DC_OZ
"Intruder Sperm-missiles Detected. Load up Defense Program, Missile Command."
inb4 Marm complain comment.
Reiku Yin
Hmm.... I can see there is still some semblance of the difficulty with the dialogue. "Just as well have more loads to give." Feels like a thought unfinished as the next line feels divorced from the comment/thought. Still, good page. Wonder where it will go next.
Azura
Oh my word I think I'm getting the vapors. <3
gunstar_1
The dialog flows well. You mind sharing what gave you difficulty on it? The panels look great as usual though. X3
Animeplayer
I came hard...I need to stay in my car for a while...
Also love the dialogue in this one x3 might have struggled with it but I enjoy it a lot. Hehe love how surprised she is... "there's more?!" Amazing work.
Oooh I love it babe! I've been waiting for the next installment! Mmm! Thank you my King!
