Alphabetarian
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Another day at the office part 19
🕑 Added 2020-02-24 01:57:19 +0000 UTCIt's a demanding company.
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Alphabetarian
Thank you for the advice. You're right, I should have added more of those, it's something that I know is used often but by focusing on the important parts of the drawing I guess my mind just filtered that out.
Chilla
Nice page! I love the panels where we can see them on top of each other. Love how content they look in that final panel. Have you thought about adding sound effects to panel 1? Or perhaps wiggly lines to panels 1 and 4? I think that could make them look more dynamic and convey the rhythmic movement that's going on. You could also add more "oomph" to the climax panel by having each character moan twice: first in normal font, then in a larger bold font. Perhaps even add a dramatic background? π Just my two cents.
