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【2022/12】Process - Our Toy (Part 11) | 過程 - Our Toy (Part 11)
🕑 Added 2022-12-05 15:21:12 +0000 UTCDraft (First Half) | 草圖（上半）
Welcome back to Our Toy (Part 11)! I want to start experimenting with manga format to better setup the story, this will be one of my goals for next year, and I want to use this opportunity to see how feasible it really is. It's also a good practice for when I draw my doujin (ง ˘ω˘ )ว
As you can see, this time, I try my best to avoid using words and hope to tell the stories mostly via symbols to avoid language barriers.
Special thanks to 萌磊MoeLei (@TwoTwoLei) and jaoncat (@jaoncat) for cameo!
歡迎回到Our Toy（Part 11）！我想要開始嘗試用漫畫格式來鋪背景故事。這也是我明年的目標之一，我想藉這次的機會來看這樣的目標可行度到底多高。作為畫本本的前置練習也不錯 (ง ˘ω˘ )ว
如你所見，這次我盡可能地避免用文字來講故事，希望能用符號來溝通以避免語言隔閡的問題。
特別感謝 萌磊MoeLei（@TwoTwoLei）以及 jaoncat（@jaoncat）來這次的客串！
This was the first version of the storyboard. As you can see, I'm very unfamiliar with creating good storyboarding/manga structure. My original intention was to lead the viewer through an "S" curve; therefore, you start reading from right to left, then left to right, then right to left. But my friends who are way more experienced in reading manga told me it just won't work for people who are used to reading manga; hence, why you see this version is no longer used XDD.
It doesn't work simply because I only have English characters on the page; thus, people will intuitively want to read from left to right, instead of right to left.
這是第一版的分鏡。如你所見，我對於畫出好的分鏡/漫畫很陌生。我原本的意圖是希望能讓讀者透過S形曲線的順序流暢閱讀；因此原本規劃是從右到左、左到右、右到左，但長年讀漫畫的朋友跟我說這絕對行不通，因此這個版本就作廢了XDD
這行不通的原因是我畫面上只有英文字母，因此讀者會下意識想要從左讀到右，而不是右到左
Draft (Second Half) | 草圖（下半）
Ah wait, that's not very clear is it… Let me clean it up a bit (📞'ω')
啊等等，這好像不是很清楚呢… 讓我整理一下(📞'ω')
Okay, now it should be much better.
As the inevitable loser, Mutoh is of course going to be serving the wrestling club. As a rule of thumb: Don't make bets with the pros in their field ʕ•̫͡•ʕ•̫͡•ʔ•̫͡•ʔ•̫͡•ʕ•̫͡•ʔ•̫͡•ʕ•̫͡•ʕ•̫͡•ʔ•̫͡•ʔ•̫͡•ʕ•̫͡•ʔ•̫͡•ʔ
I plan to add the wrestling outfit all together after I'm done with the first colored draft, the reason will become clear later down the post :3
啊，現在應該乾淨多了
不論怎麼樣都會輸的武藤，這次想必會為摔角社服務的。經驗法則：別跟專家在他們的領域打賭 ʕ•̫͡•ʕ•̫͡•ʔ•̫͡•ʔ•̫͡•ʕ•̫͡•ʔ•̫͡•ʕ•̫͡•ʕ•̫͡•ʔ•̫͡•ʔ•̫͡•ʕ•̫͡•ʔ•̫͡•ʔ
我打算等上完顏色草稿後再一次把摔角服加上，原因稍後會解釋:3
Base Color | 底色
Colored Draft (First Half) | 上色草稿（上半）
My plan is to do simple cel-shading for the first half. If I render it the usual way I render, it'd probably take forever (´ . .̫ . `)
我這次打算上半都用賽璐璐解決。畢竟如果我用一般的畫法來細修的話應該會畫到死(´ . .̫ . `)
Colored Draft (Second Half) | 上色草稿（下半）
Phew, 8 characters take forever to do even if it's just the draft...
You might notice this blue rectangle keep popping up here and there, it's the actual crop of the image. I am considering the possibility of making this an animation, so I'm drawing quite a bit outside of the actual crop just in case if I want to move the characters. No promises that I'll do an 8 character animation, though (｡•̀ᴗ-)✧
呼，8個角色就算只是草稿也好花時間啊…
你可能有注意到這個藍色框框一直時不時地跳出來。其實這藍色框框才是實際裁切的大小。這樣做的原因是我在考慮要把這個做成動畫，畫出邊界外這樣需要移動時才有移動的餘地。但我不保證我真的會做一個8人的動畫就是了(｡•̀ᴗ-)✧
Colored Draft (Clothing) | 上色草稿（衣物）
Okay, so all of the layers I painted on the body to give it its form can actually be recycled with little to no adjustment to the layer content. In this case, for Mutoh's singlet, all I had to do was paint the silhouette of the singlet + adding some base color (as shown on the bottom right), then applying the layers we copied, voila, it's done XD.
It works only when the clothing is super fitting, so that the clothing shares the exact same form as the body. Also remember to add a little folds here and there :3c
好，簡單來說我用來讓身體有體積感的圖層其實幾乎不用調整就能直接拿去做緊身衣。這個例子中，武藤的緊身衣我只有畫了剪影＋固有色（如右下角的圖），接下來就直接把身體的圖層複製上來，噠噠，完成了XD
但這個做法只適用於非常貼身的衣服，因為這樣衣服才能跟身體共用一樣的起伏變化。別忘了到處加一些小皺褶:3c
Composition Correction | 過程 - 構圖修正
I felt like the previous version didn't read very well. Some parts had too much contrast (especially when the colorful wrestling singlets were added) and was taking the focus away from our toy.
Yes, there will also be a version without the chastity cage.
我覺得之前的版本可讀性不是很高。有些地方對比太強烈（尤其是當顏色鮮豔的摔角服套上之後）並且有點影響我們玩具的焦點
啊對，也會有一個沒有貞操帶的版本
Rendering (Focal Regions) | 細修（焦點區域）
First, I circle the parts where I think people will look at. In these parts, I want tomake sure it gets very detailed relative to other parts.
首先我先圈起我覺得讀者會關注的地方。在這些區域我想畫得比其他區域更多細節一些
With just the focal regions rendered, it already looks quite complete!
儘管只有細修這些圈起來的地方，整體完成度卻瞬間提高了很多！
Rendering (The Rest) | 細修（剩下的部分）
Yes, I also made a version without the chastity belt 👀👌
對，我也做了一個沒有貞操帶的版本👀👌
Rendering (Sweat) | 細修（汗水）
Post-Processing (Second Half) | 後製（下半）
Draugnut's Suggestion (Second Half) | 爪爪的建議（下半）
It's time for @Draugnut's professional advice again ♪⁽⁽٩( ᐖ )۶⁾⁾ ₍₍٩( ᐛ )۶₎₎♪
He recommended that I simplify the thigh's muscle, thereby making the thigh a bit chubbier; this chubby part creates better contrast to the rest of the thin body part (such as the torso), as well as creating a better rhythm for detail density. He also recommended that I light Mutoh's feet up a bit more while removing a bit of details; hence, making the feet look more delicious, and Mutoh's silhouette is a lot clearer too.
There were anatomy fixes on Mutoh's shoulder region as well as body fixes for one of the side character. Huge thanks to him as always (*ฅ́˘ฅ̀*)♡
Time to finish the manga for the first half!
又到了 @爪爪 的專業建議時間了♪⁽⁽٩( ᐖ )۶⁾⁾ ₍₍٩( ᐛ )۶₎₎♪
這次他建議我簡化武藤大腿的肌肉，讓大腿肉一點，這樣跟身體其他精瘦的部分（例如軀幹）比較能形成對比，同時在細節分布的節奏上也比較好。他也建議我把武藤的腳打亮一點，同時也減少更多細節，這樣看起來比較好吃而且武藤的輪廓也比較清楚。
還有一些武藤肩膀的肌肉也有修正，也將其中一個路人體積修得好看很多。真的很感謝他(*ฅ́˘ฅ̀*)♡
是時候來完成上半的漫畫了！
Rendering (First Half) | 細修（上半）
I decided to give up on the variation for the manga part since I don't think people are going to "use" this page and I'm already overworking myself (›´ω`‹ )
我決定放棄漫畫的差分，因為我覺得應該沒有人會用這頁來尻，然後我的工作量其實已經有點爆了(›´ω`‹ )
Post-Processing (Second Half) | 後製（下半）
Lowered the contrast a bit for your viewing pleasure, as well as added some motion blurs
將對比降低了一些閱讀起來應該會比較舒服，同時也加了一些動態模糊
Live2D Parameters
Our Toy pt11 Live2D Parameters
Animating 8 different people cumming is A TON OF WORK ･ﾟ･(つω`ﾟ)･ﾟ･ Call me a cumductor if you will (?)
Not to mention: due to variations, Mutoh has 4 different ways to cum, they all had to be animated differently...
要讓8個人射精真的作業量超大啦 ･ﾟ･(つω`ﾟ)･ﾟ･
更不用說因為差分的關係，武藤射精的方式有4種，每種都得重新設計…
One noteworthy experiment this time is that every parameters in this section is actually animated via physics calculation. This saved me a ton of time, and the result looked very interesting too, especially when Mutoh's penis swings around when he's naked and cageless. I'll definitely practice more with the physics function in the future.
這次其中一個值得注意的實驗是這個資料夾內的parameter全部都是用物理演算自動移動的。這真的省了我不少作動畫的時間，而結果看起來也很不錯，尤其是武藤的雞雞在裸體＋無貞操帶的版本甩來甩去的樣子。我未來絕對會繼續練習使用這個功能的
Another thing I experimented this time is adding a hanging cum thread that leaks out from the urethra, it makes the cumming feel a lot more realistic and is overall not difficult to make. (´,,•ω•,,)♡
另一個我實驗的東西是在馬眼附近加入一條垂掛的精液，這讓射精的動畫感覺更加真實，整體來說也挺好做的(´,,•ω•,,)♡
Overall, this animation took 2 full days for me to render all the different variations, animating a gangbang scene is a fuck ton of work (pun not intended), I'm not sure if I'll be doing this again in the future XD
整體來看，輸出這個動畫的不同差分總共花了我整整兩天的時間才搞定，要做輪姦的動畫真的超級花時間的，不確定未來還會不會這樣燒肝XD
Comments
Sand Suna
現在變成文言文模式了嗎www
Lebenriss
天何言哉？色色行焉，正太生焉，天何言哉？🚬🤏😮💨
Sand Suna
好耶！今晚應該有機會發表，render了整整兩天ww 不過這樣未來是不是就看不到你的論文了( ´•̥̥̥ω•̥̥̥` )
Lebenriss
這集的Our Toy其實是十分之合我口味的😋😋😋無論是劇情元素、兩位客串角色，還有主菜場面都很讚😘🤌🤌🤌Buonissimo, buonissimo. 但可能我老了——除了好之外我太多沒有其他廢話要說了wwww 👍🏻。
Sand Suna
真的…對我來說真的是不可或缺的好建議 是說原本還以為這次你不會出現了（？
Lebenriss
已經不衹一次：總覺得爪神的建議眞的很神lol 就是做一些很微細（至少對外行人來說很微細）的修改，出來的效果卻差距好一截
Sand Suna
就是來客串的萌磊XD
阿克攸零
摔角社黃色頭髮那隻好讚艸
Sand Suna
感謝客串！٩(˃̶͈̀௰˂̶͈́)و
萌磊MoeLei
色死我
Sand Suna
(ง ˘ω˘ )ง Yes I would like to entertain you with the possibility that maybe Mutoh is losing on purpose (?? But it's just a conspiracy, we'll never know 🤫
Videogames121
I'm already excited! Loving what I see and definitely looking forward to this! I enjoy the concept of Mutoh trying so hard to get his cage removed tht he's willing to attempt to take them on xD It's really cute <3
Sand Suna
Thank you 🥰🥰 Still a lot more refining to do!
zxatua
This already looks so awesome and hot
Sand Suna
That's how you know I work very hard all the time ٩(๑•̀ω•́๑)۶♥!! I'm still experimenting with the comic strip format, though. It might be too much work for relatively little effect ;w;
Sand Suna
肝膽相照（物理）（並沒有
犽連
並不是🥛🥛
firefox90210
Wow, this was turned around quickly after the last post. Loving the wrestling singlets and the small wrestling montage in the comic strip
QB菌
很充分地鍛煉到全身了呢，內髒也有很好地修行到（啊不對）
Sand Suna
Thank you! Designing 10 different singlets was very mentally draining! (›xωx‹ )
Sand Suna
犽連居然這麼S嗎👀👌👌
Sand Suna
Thanks Shinji! Both for the compliment and the feedback XD Regarding publishing multiple posts, it's actually something I am intentionally avoiding because I know that followers get an email notification whenever there's a new post, and the last thing I want to do is send out multiple notification for one WIP post. I think it's perceived as long probably because there is essentially two different works in one post and the manga post has a very vertical orientation. Hopefully the posts will become shorter when I become more experienced with this medium! Btw, if you ever get tired of reading my scribbles, feel free to jump down to the bottom and just view the latest progress, I won't mind (`･ω･´)b
Sand Suna
這次剛好有對到syo的胃口嗎(´,,•ω•,,)♡
ラモン
Those tight singlets are so hot 🔥🔥 Awesome drafts already! 👏
犽連
WOW~ 還是鎖起來吧(?)
Shinji
Phew.. it is "wow" to see all your way of building a scene and the making - but this post got a bit looooooong in my eyes.. I get lost by scrolling so much and not coming to an end. Sorry to say that. I bet, the result will be stunning as always and I love all your thoughts - but maybe next time give it two or three WIP-posts.. well, maybe I am just getting older *LOL* And I feel for poor Mutoh. He has to suffer and I bet now he will be caged until eternity, won't he? Oh dear... sometimes I wish to be that young and fit again. Thanks for showing, but now I am tired from reading this post... <3
syo233215
果然男孩子就該玩♂️摔♂️角
