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Chapter 136: Combat Lesson

🕑 Added 2017-09-14 22:12:11 +0000 UTC

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The above are good edits, but I would add that lupine is correct latin for wolf and canine is better for dog.

Thanks for the chapter! Here's some corrections: had stain outside -> had stayed outside without getting too much injured. -> without getting injured too much. OR without getting too injured. Accalia lacked in every aspect. -> Accalia was lacking in every aspect. For a first time, -> For a first timer, OR For the first time, of an now even angrier pig -> of a now even angrier pig Contrary the -> In contrast, the OR On the contrary, the of the agile feline, -> of the agile canine, (feline = cat, canine = dog/wolf/fox)


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