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Chapter 142: Counting Sheep

🕑 Added 2017-12-03 16:34:50 +0000 UTC

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Michigo

"If the dragon sold off all of her hidden wealth in the [Inner Space], she might rival a strong House of the count rank." Didn't her wealth previously rival the amount of a whole kingdom?

The only phrase that stood out to me on the first read as being a bit clumsy is the last 3 words "readied to act." "Prepared to act, is smoother. Readied is fine if you use a concrete subject such as "readied her weapon." But with the context being more general preparation "prepared to act." seems best to me.


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