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Chapter 119: I Will Take Them All

🕑 Added 2017-05-04 20:39:00 +0000 UTC

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Rip Woodham

I found it to be enjoyable. The initial talk about the merchant houses felt more like an info dump, but it was fine too.

Great, I was a bit worried it would be too much of an info dump

Cynder111

i would agree. Its easy enough to read if you want to understand it.

Ato

it's easy for me but I am used to reading this kinda stuff, so I am probably not a good person to measure on :3

Is the talk about the layout of the city and the current state of affairs too heavy or did you find it easy to read? I thought it might be a bit too much but it shows the layout of the city and is a bit of world building

Ato

when they started the slum talk I realized where it was going, and I liked it, go girl, you buy half the city


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