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Chapter 155: Deal Between Two Parties

🕑 Added 2018-04-28 13:30:09 +0000 UTC

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Rip Woodham

Nope, just bruised, at least in the book.

She did bleed, but it was only a couple drops from an excoriation.

Rip Woodham

First off, thanks for the updates! :-) Enjoyed them as they unfolded in your google drive. But the reason I'm posting is that the goddesses already talked with her about her blood extensively, previously in chapter 95, so maybe you could reword it some? Also.... honestly it's been bothering me for a long time haha, but in chapter 56 when the adventurer is inadvertently killed by her, every time it is brought up again you say it is because of her blood. Yet she didn't bleed in that encounter, and the only thing mentioned there is that her dagger gained a dark sheen. Maybe her blood is tied to her aura which is tied to the effect on the weapon, but I feel like it could use better clarification. :-)


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