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Chapter 145: Live Combat Training

🕑 Added 2018-01-28 13:46:33 +0000 UTC

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Also, Sorry! I did break the message when I changed my patreon link from the number to my username. It won't load out of oblivion. I even got the ticket sent to 'Engineering'. <a href="https://www.patreon.com/mikenewber">https://www.patreon.com/mikenewber</a> lol even though clicking on my name does the same thing. I have 2 stories posted now. AICOT? is about being reborn in a new world with most choices unpicked and evolving organically. Canary 13 is about being set up to get Reborn in one world and getting kidnapped into another. I'm really glad to have found your Book on Amazon and then searched to see if you had a web page, and then found Patreon! I'm having fun with it!

I like this chapter! I especially like the description of Nisha's attack. I only noticed one typo. I had to look up the definition of "evert" to find out what it meant: "On the surface, this puts the points in correspondence for evert" &lt; should be "every".


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