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Chapter 209: Undead Disaster

🕑 Added 2020-02-29 17:55:00 +0000 UTC

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RuRo

A little constructive criticism: I think, it might be slightly confusing, since there are 2 priest characters. Even though you call one of them "head priest" and the other "fallen priest", this still might be a little confusing for the reader, especially around the part, when the "head priest" arrives at the tomb and at the same time you describe the actions of the "fallen priest" at the same location. Might I suggest, that you change the title of the "head priest" to something different, yet synonimous (head bishop?) or even better, give him a name since he is a good guy, which the priestess knew and probably admired.

Can't wait for more!

Demian Buckle

Thank you for the Chapter.

Wow... heavy...


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