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Chapter 186: Selection

🕑 Added 2019-03-24 08:46:34 +0000 UTC

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Philipp

Thanks for the reply. It's a big plus that you take the time to answer. Even a deus ex solution would be good, because in this chapter I get the feeling(most likely my imagination) that you ignored or forgot the changes. Especially because you wrote in chapter 178 that she grew by about 2 hand spans, which seems to great change a to simply be ignored

I'm working on it, the chapter in the past mentioned that she went out of the house that morning before seeing anyone else and I have an idea in mind, perhaps it feels like a deus ex machina solution, I think it could work though

Philipp

I agree with Michael Lin, and I really hope you can take a little time to change the chapter so that the change in appearance is not just ignored. Especially because the normaly good quality of your chapters, such an obvios oversight stands out even more.

thanks for the chapter. I agree on Michael Lin, in the previous chapters, Nisha has been through much physical changes, it seems odd that nobody notices it. As the narrative goes, i feel that the explanotary part of the story has supplemented the "action" part of the story and thus the story beacame somewhat slow. Please restore a balance so that we don't go throught 5 chapters of explanation without the actual put it to use. For example i think it would have been enough to stop at the dragon force part of the story then resume the academy/leandar part of hte story.

Mythix

thanks for the chapter !

Liedral

Went back and scanned through the previous chapters in hopes I didn't miss anything. But hasn't Nisha's appearance changed with the absorption of dragon force? I'm more surprised it wasn't remarked on by her family. Thanks for the chap and glad you have more time now.

Ferco

xD

Thenks for the chapter! Enjoy your new place!


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