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Chapter 201: Touch Up

🕑 Added 2019-10-22 14:05:10 +0000 UTC

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To note: you don't have to focus on combat so much, I enjoy the battles, but also like character development. I think focusing on some of the not Nisha characters might make your story feel more mature. Giving an excuse to drag he brother in, or her classmates in more often (I mean it could be anyone) would give Nisha more opportunities to develop as a character as well as the other characters. A solo hero is great, no criticism here, the more the merrier right!

This chapter, most welcomed it is

Demian Buckle

Thank you for the Chapter.


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