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Chapter 216: Small Scale Monster Surge

🕑 Added 2020-05-13 12:10:41 +0000 UTC

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It's fine, the conversation was kept short to build a tension arc, and slowly reveal more of the circumstances in the future. And you don't have to apologize, everyone has different feelings when reading a story

Andrew

sorry for rambling but it was the end of the fourth book and I was kind of disappointed

Andrew

in your book the last chapter feels like you just cut off it doesn't feel like they were done with the conversation but the next chapter has nothing to do with them so you could probably add a chapter there where like the dragon God is like trying to make a deal with them or something or when they meet up with her they could have a chaperone or something or maybe he could offer to show them a favor they follow the rules or he could trade them knowledge or something else for a promise

Andrew

Thank you for the chapter but since there's the coronavirus why don't you create chapter everyday should try to push forward your writing

Go go team nisha! XD

Demian Buckle

Thank you for the Chapter.


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