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Chapter 242: Struggle To Survive

🕑 Added 2021-03-15 20:09:14 +0000 UTC

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ShadeByTheSea

Honestly I feel the arena chapters so far could have been 1 and not lost too much. :/ I'm just not interested in fights without Nisha in them and the [Eternal Warriors] backstory, much less one of his friends we will likely never meet. It's like something easily understood is being explained in exacting detail. I mean if you look at events that have happened since chapter 216 basically nothing important has happened. The only important things are the start of the plague, start of city expansion, advice on her swordsmanship, and her path to returning to the fourth tier.

Jens Bernhardt

You may want to keep in mind that this chapter essentially is part of the 5th book, in a story that spans both many millennia and a multitude of “planes”, such as three dragon realms for one. This requires a lot of background- and setup-work to be done over time. Also, while I too find myself waiting and wanting for the next chapter to be released, the pace is much more reasonable once you are in the reading flow of the finished book. :-) There are great a many things I am waiting for, such as [Spoiler alert] … - … when do we get to see her first golem ? If it even is hers and not of her shield’s. - … will they be guarding her new city district ? - … what will the wolf god scroll be used for ? - … will her other elemental affinities also personify and gift her with something ? - … which of the two mana consuming poisons, the Blackroot Plague or her death affinity blood, will win out ? - … is there a relation between her blood, the goddess who toyed with it, and the Blackroot Plague ? - … when will she gain the ability to shift into dragon form and back on her own ? - … will the Empress of the Terus Empire cause further trouble for her, such es through the troops stationed there ? - … will there be (in-)fighting for the food stored by house Dharmas ? - … will the head of house, the other Dukes or the King develop an aneurysm once they realize that part of Thurgau now belongs to Nisha / House Dharmas ? - … speaking about aneurysm, what about the beard’s length of a certain smithing dwarf once he realizes that a certain “tree lover too gentle and lithe for working fire” outpaced his entire class ? Or that he inadvertedly insulted a Duke level noble who just happens to be a dragon ? Take your pick, really ... - … shouldn’t there be priests with the house of Dharmas by now ? - … should the Blackroot Plague outbreak not have … broken out … by now ? I mean how much time exactly does it take for the people to realized they are sprouting branches ? - … what happened to the librarian or the perverted scholar hiding between the rows enjoying sketchy romance novels ? I kind of miss their exchanges … ;-) - … should that higher level elder dragon not start investigating why an old contract believed long lost started poking him when its “rule” got taxed ? - … what will come of that fire salamander encounter in the past ? Had the dungeon master not promised duking it out if she ever dared entering when the city dungeon went into its “special period” ? - … it’s been a while since Nisha gained a new combat skill, or checked the library for one. What will be next ? - … wasn’t there a certain hard case chess loving history teacher who initially disproved of her as his student ? What became of him ? … and the list goes on. :-p

Demian Buckle

Thank you for the Chapter.

Termac

The plague is just starting, and the thing with the thieves guild is ongoing. And Tyne is still teaching her. There's a lot going on, and the chapters aren't released often, so yes. The story does advance slowly.

Ferco

I really like the world building you do, but sometimes it feels like this is a story about a world that happens to have a dragon who sometimes does things. I'm not sure if I where to read all the chapters one after the other I'd get the same feeling, but as it is, I can hardly remember the things that are supposed to be happening. Wasn't there something going on with a lot of people coming to the school this year? Was it related to the dragon guy who was sent by some other dragon guy? Is Nisha even going to school at this point? What happened with the goddesses? Wasn't there a plage somewhere? Wasn't there a wall/district being constructed at some point? Wasn't she going to be taught by this guy that's telling them this story? Will the arena be used at some point in the story? Please read this as constructive as it can be: I feel that too many things are happening, but at the same time, nothing is happening. Everything that's introduced to the story gets dropped. The interactions with the thieves guild could have been developed into an arc. The plague could have been another arc. The guy teaching her could have been another one. And so on. Instead, we have a little bit of everything.


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