Knn-Hinotori
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[Poll Winner] Darkness
🕑 Added 2025-12-13 00:06:47 +0000 UTCFull image available via the community tab!
Pretty happy with how this one turned out, Darkness turned out to be quite fun to work with in general. for once i was able to actually keep it on the simpler side, though I was almost about to redraw every silhouette in the background in detail in addition to almost drawing another page but simplifying things a bit really seems to help out my workflow a lot.
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Knn-Hinotori
Whoops thanks for pointing the error out, just fixed it, i forgot to remove all the placeholders. I also initially planned to make the dialogue a bit longer but while writing it became kind of repetitive, so I cut it a bit shorter rather than having 3 nearly identical pages without any real substance.
Geist
Overall, pretty excellent work. The story felt like it was a bit quick to end. But it was still good regardless. There was a slight error on dialogue pg 3 in the bottom left corner. With the word Text appearing over the dialogue 3 times. The crowd looks good. So I'm glad you save yourself from the redraw. Another page would have been cool but considering the workload of the last two projects. Completely understandable. Plus it's important to keep some projects simple and sweet for your own workload sanity. I eagerly await to see what you come up with Mai Sakurajima. Best of luck
