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Preschool Champion, Chapter 1
🕑 Added 2020-10-21 07:23:33 +0000 UTCUhh... Okay, yeah, this is a bit of a big project, and we really, REALLY would like any feedback you guys can give us. Please, please let us know what you think on this, either the story, the subject, or the format.
Especially the format. Is the one giant picture okay or do you prefer the individual pages?
Yeah, this is getting submitted as a tie-in for Crown Tundra coming out tomorrow, but it's been in the works for a long, long time. Hell, the next couple of chapters have been written (they'll be shorter). Just a fun, easy excuse to mess around with the Pokemon universe with a regressed Lance as a central focus character.
Future stories would/will involve Lance fighting to establish himself as a trainer in Preschool, which is a good, easy way to pull in other regressed Pokemon characters. We put together a huuuuge list with just a buttload of characters we wanna work with.
Hell, just in this small story we see a lot of characters that are cute and fun to look at. Regressed!Agatha especially steals the show. ^^
I've been waiting to submit this one for a while so, again, any thoughts you guys have would be very, very much appreciated.
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Heh. Appreciate the feedback, Lulshi.
Heh.... No worries, they'll be coming once we have time. Thanks a lot for the comment. ^^
Oooh this will be fun, I look forward to more chapters
Maybe I'm a poor choice to say, since I find I don't need images for good writing. Though I do appreciate it. But I enjoy the premise quite a bit. As for format, single images flows a lot better imo.
..well, since no one else is commenting, uh,,nice stuff and since i never get to say it elsewhere. uh.. FIRST
